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Massive 07-07-02 05:29 PM

WEEK 6 (1-0) DALYRICALWHIZ VS (1-0) EN-geniuz
 
VERSES DUE BY FRIDAY, TRY AND GET THEM UP BY WEDNESDAY IF YOU CAN.


30 LINE MAX


VOTE ON AT LEAST 3 OTHER BATTLES,OR 3 VOTES DEDUCTED FROM YOUR BATTLE..


MAKE THIS HOT!!

DaLyricalWhiz 07-09-02 02:34 AM

fasho
 
checkin da fuck in
holla cuzzz, good luck en-geniuz

DaLyricalWhiz 07-10-02 08:55 PM

ima give this midget a smidget of giant lyrics,.....side order this beef -like i was micky-d-n-it
"en-geuinuz" sounds like a coke high, fo eyed, college frat who likes late night penis/
u doofiss, don't do this, u couldn't put ya words together if u had adhesvie to glue it with/
i'll pop ya corny text test the best u losing it
im the "DALYRICALUHAUL" ya lyrics get the movin
,cumshots got ya face pale like stockton, mics u couldn't rock it if u was livin houston/
ima abusive- like a drunk-step father, u going off the edge -if u step farther
so keep ya distance like non-swimmers from deep water/
cease ya existence if u increase to creep harder, you'll need to hop in a oven just to get hotter/
but u can't get hotter than heat punches punishin u turnin u red yellow & green, peeps said they seen u trafficin on the street/
u couldn't spit ya raps if u put em in ya mouth
and ya pet cat, is the only pussy at ya house
now u got a rash for lettin rats suck u off
got ya rib removed, now u the head boss(lol)/

come on dawg, average ametuer raps get ate up
with burgers and fries, u still couldn't ketch up


holla, 10min keystlye on em, sorry it was short, i had to bounce 1

DeNihil 07-10-02 09:47 PM

Vote DLW
 
I like wordplay, in logical doses, but En-Geniuz's verse just got annoying after awhile, especially the spoken word interludes. DLW's verse was concise, hardcore, and to the point. It was a good battle, but I liked DLW's verse better.

Master Blaster 07-11-02 01:15 AM

En-geniuz for my vote

nice punchlines

holla

-1-

DaLyricalWhiz 07-11-02 01:21 AM

^^^^^...........????? okkkkk 1-1
uppin for some REAL votes

UNiQuE 07-11-02 01:52 AM

Vote- EN-GeNiUz

He had Way better punches and wordplay... The other cat was a bunch of Weak shit...

OFF~CeNTeR 07-11-02 07:14 AM

Vote=En-Geniuz
 
En-Geniuz:
below average verse from you...Ive seen your shit on RA...you had a TON of forced wordplay and the punches didnt hit that hard...you also used TWO CUM LINES...are you retarded or could you really not think of anything better because that is the most played concept ever in the history of emceeing...those took away so much from your verse....and those lil :::blah blha::: shits were annoying...Most of your concepts were either played...filler...or forced wordplay...the only reason you won because your oponents verse was so garbage..because believe me...you sucked pretty bad yourself..

I Got’s This Inferno-With-Flares Of Illness, While You Stay Just Eternal-With-Glares~*
''Ride Your Own Dick'' You Love Your Own Undercover ''Internal Affairs''~*
Overall:4.0/10

DALYRICALWHIZ:
Your verse was nothing to brag about either...you were more concise though...short and to the point...your oppoents lines didnt sway me at all...your flow was fine...but you also used a cum line...I cant believe that you guys dont comprehend that you dont use that concept...you had whack ass wordplay and I could tell it was a 10 min key....there was no content in your verse...
OVerall:2.5/10

k1ll@~m1c 07-11-02 08:06 AM

i wus feelin En-geniuz shyt more cuz he had more multies and betta punchlines DLW shyt wuz just 2 simple but ova all

vote=En-geniuz

LadyMayhem 07-11-02 09:20 AM

Kinda Simple, No Creative Punch's In This Battle But Lyrical Gets My Vote

He Had Better Multi's And Meta's, Arite Punch's

Geniuz Had Alot Of Fillers And Most Lines In There Were Forced, Didn't Have Any Good Multi's Cause They Were Mostly Out Of Content ..

Vote - Lyrical

Jae Cyph 07-11-02 11:34 AM

close battle en-geniouus won by his hardr hitting punches not many ppunches but the ones he did use hit hard. lyrical, i wasnt feeling your flow really but u had nice vocab but like i said engenious won by punches ~1~
vote-en-genious

M-Body 07-11-02 01:25 PM

Vote=En-Genious
Reasons: He came alot harder wit his punches, had better wordplay, an a couple of nice meta's. His flowed together alot better too. Lyrical, ya came a lil to simple compared to him... but its all good. Nice battle fella's...~1~

*UnFuckWithAbLe* 07-11-02 03:38 PM

um iight .. this iz how it goes ..

en giunuis or wutever .. ur shit was iight .. dont get too cocky because ur whole verse was incredbly played ..

lyrical whiz .. iwasnt feelin this at all ..

my vote- genius ..
1

Mystery~murdera 07-11-02 09:04 PM

both of that shit was weak, the first one was forced and the second was bad, I gotta give it to the first guy for a least tryin to come hard.
vote=DALYRICALWHIZ

hisTRYwreCKEr 07-12-02 03:15 AM

VOTE EN-GENIUZ

CAME HARDER TO ME

BOTH FLOWED

NICE BATTLE GUYZ

HOLLA


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