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DrasticMeasureZ 11-26-04 09:36 AM

Diss To This Kid At Skool- Smoke
 
THIS NIGGA NAME SMOKE

CALL MY HOME BOI VINCE A FEW MINUTES AGO

I DON’T KNOW WHAT DA NIGGA WAS THINKING

BUT HE WAS THE NIGGA STARTED RUMORS ABOUT ME

TELLING LIES ABOUT ME AND SHIT

SO………HE TOLD MY BOI VINCE THAT HE’Z GOING TO JUMP ME

BUT HE DIDN’T KNOW THAT I WAS ON THE OTHER LINE


Ring ring ring

Vince- brick residents
Smoke- yo
Vince- who is this?
Smoke- this vince right?
Vince- yea this is he
Smoke- u know that boi name drastic everyone at skool talks about?

Vince- yea that’s my boi why?
Smoke- tell that fool iam gonna jump his ass
Vince- (snicker) why mayne?
Smoke- cause I heard he stole my girl manye
Vince- o word well u know how he is, he’s an grapper
Smoke- yea I know tell that fool he’z going to get jump by me and my boi’z

Vince- ooooooooookkk

Smoke hangs up

Vince- drastic
Drastic- muwhahahahahahahahah
:laugh2:



now this an diss to his ass, its going to be on audio, and on the disk, my homie vince going to hand deliver this disk to his ass on sunday


THIS NIGGA DONT KNOW WHAT HE JUST DID~!


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O yall didn’t know that I was real clever the man behind the talking stages
I reallyed showed yall not to fuck wit me, leave all yall in wrap bandages
Yall really think yall can erupt me, like an earthquake think yall can split me
So I bet u think u can rip me, plz u sickin me, turning yall lies into disbeliefs
Its true where I come from , the pink city , pimpin and fucking these girls in the butt
Its true what I say , come at me with them hatred, and get stung in the ab, str8 to the gut
So u wanna tell lies about me, saying u beat me in fighting , that’s crap come a lil closer
Say what u say is true, let yo actions do it for you, o no u cant swing at me DAMN~! U a poser
O so u think when u say u interested in marines, now u think u a soldier, plz I’ll leave u in da deep seas
mayne u aint even worth an fight, u write poetry and u always sobber beating u is like watching an baby bleed
U wear red and u always throwing them gang sign, think u an blood, feel the blood that iam eruption
Cutting u in every section, feel my punches hitting u in every direction, like an f u got in English u stand un-correction
U was wondering why Jennifer didn’t come home on Halloween. Yea I was an freak on that night
I was oochie wally banging that bitch, she started screaming when I putted in the black hole that’s right~!
Took that bitch to the liquor store hypnotized her mind told that bitch foget yo skank ass behind
It was really stupid when u called my home boi vince told him that u was going to jump me
Boi what was really stupid that I was on the other line hearing ya mouth nigga u is dead meat
Like I always say the more u talk shit , the more blood spills like halo 2 iam gunnin for the kill
U hear this beat, u hear my flow’z going into ya ear , nigga u cant touch me, time to pay the bill
O and yo boi dennis what he gonna do? O I forgot he betrayed u , he lend the gun in my hand
Now get it into yo thick head, I run things in my skool, everyone calls me drastic YEP I GOT FANS
Bitch what u got, I took yo girl, ya friends, what else to take, I left u poor, now I bet u feel hard-less
Regardless what u say about the rumors about me, be ready on Monday, get yo bois and get ready to get skard
Now whats ya name? Smoke is it? Right now u enhaling beef iam gonna leave u choked u betta exhale
Run up in ya face in the morning, here how its going to go~! Get pushed, talk shit, get stuck and get suspended deal~!

DrasticMeasureZ 11-26-04 09:52 AM

yo mayne uppin for feeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed backs...........

DrasticMeasureZ 11-26-04 10:13 AM

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DrasticMeasureZ 11-26-04 11:22 AM

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Parallel 11-26-04 11:39 AM

good use of the multi but just work on stucture cereal thats all you need is to shorten your liens and fix stucture...use 6-13 sylables in a line but stil use multis work well..;) keep um dropin

DrasticMeasureZ 11-26-04 11:47 AM

o aiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiight uppin for feedbacks

DrasticMeasureZ 11-26-04 01:17 PM

Uppin For Feedbacks ^_______________^

Premanition 11-26-04 01:30 PM

i liked this piece, gud flow n multis in there, emotion was average but vocab n everything else was real nice, gud drop dawg....7.5/10 n thats gud from me...lol

can ya plz hit the om in my sig wiv some feed plz drastic, n if its gud enough i'd appreciate ya vote for om of month, 13 votes already...thx dawg


\/\/\/\/\/ in the sig.....pz

DrasticMeasureZ 11-26-04 01:39 PM

Its Done.........................^____________^

DrasticMeasureZ 11-26-04 02:46 PM

uppin for more feedbacks mayne

31 views come on yo uppin

Knucklez 11-26-04 04:03 PM

U Want Sum Feedback Pussy....i Hate Pink Niggas That Are Bitches...yea There Is A Such Thing As Braggin Rights But When U Dont Battle Sum Cuz They Are Knew Then Fuck A Pink Nigga Ill Shit On U Turn U Into B.r.o.w.n. Bitches

DrasticMeasureZ 11-26-04 06:40 PM

dude iam no longer in the pink krew i wasnt even in since like last week i just like tha sig.............uppin for feed

PayDay 11-26-04 07:00 PM

Dizzzzzzzam Man...that Nigga Gon Hate U Fo Sho...i Liked This...it Was A Little Bit Long, But Its Tight...8/10...keep This Shit Coming

Introspect. 11-26-04 07:24 PM

lmao long as hell but i liked it just work on ya structure..leave feed on damn he's back..LMAO i brought that beastly open mic back..

Ysdat 11-26-04 08:20 PM

long ass shit, but it was a good read,good rhyme's, flow was good.
repay the favour,link in my sig


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