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WICKEDCLOWN vs .MictoriouS.
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Bullshit No hate votes 30mins to check in 30 mins to drop a verse after check in................... Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 11-26-04 at 01:45 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
.MictoriouS. has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-26-04 01:20 PM.
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WICKEDCLOWN has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-26-04 01:26 PM.
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haha motha fucka.... you ready for this?...check it motha fucka step to me like he iron mike in his illist prime lil bitch imma show you mictorious aint worth a fuckin dime this fool trys to spit his shit ill and misses the mark like shaqs freethrows imma show you son were hatred comes from, belive me that shit grows deep inside when you step to me, imma spit it to ya ears drums like fire motha fucka you think you got the skillz? damn dawg youz a lier and you only lyin to ya damn self, we all know ya rhymes suck nigga you bout to find out what it means to run outta luck mictorious im splittin ya fuckin cells like mitosus in the lab watch the fuck out son, see the ax on tha shelf? imma grab and start swingin it straight to ya motha fuckin dome im sendin ya home, fuck you nigga you been sonned and now its time to send ya ass straight to hevan to meet the lord nigga your name is gonna be the next death to be added to my murked board yeah bitch its time for ya lyrical death and shits commin soon when i pull my ax back and swing it fast ya meet ya doom motha fucka no ones gonna miss you, ya dead, bloody on tha floor standin at heavins gate and knowin u been fucked up hardcore BIATCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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. . My rymes fully 'sarrated` to maximize 'damage~to~text' My lines pack muscle` your's cant 'manage~to~flex' / Eat ya' 'heart whole' and leave you 'cast' like the 'dead~sea~scrolls' you 'bastard` get 'blasted' till ya 'head~piece~rolls' / Like a 'bag' on your 'head` i'll have you 'gaspin fo' breath` call me 'moses` I'll 'part' ya 'skull' and put ah 'gap~in~yo~head' / Ravage necks' wit 'cut throat style` as I 'cratered~his~chest`'served' this hater like a 'waiter' and 'catered~his~flesh / 'Haunt you in ya sleep' this is my 'dream~task' this dope~is~threw we got no 'hope~in~you' this kid 'prayed to god to win and he~laughed'...! / Best be 'enlisting~in~track~dun' cuz you dont 'run~shit' you dumb~bitch i dont 'get ya punches' you should keep a 'dissing~in~captions'...! / Im 'quick-to-CRASH-the-SCENE' lyke 'frightened~vandils', and ill 'PRESS-ya-SOLE(soul)' lyke 'TIGHTNED~SANDALZ', Im 'fightin~and~ill', so watch me 'BURN-dis-WICK' lyke i wuz 'LIGHTING~CANDLEZ' / -- K.O. -- Personal |
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Voted For: .MictoriouS.
??? Are You Fucking Serious???... Clown You Whole Verse Was Lacking... Most Of Your Punches Sucked... And The Decent Ones Were Soooooo Played... Only Thing I Can Say You Had Better Was Structure... Mic Or Whatever, Ya Shit Was Pretty Decent... Some Nice Originality And Some Decent Punches And Wordplay... You DID Have A Pretty Nice Flow... You Need To Learn To Set It Up Better Though... Overall This Was An Easy Win... Vote: Mic-???...This Kid .One. |
for christs sake................fuckin hell... uppin this shit
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Uppin this bitch .. !!!! .............. |
Voted For: .MictoriouS.
alright mictorious got this break down wicked-aaight u had a good flow going on in that verse and i saw some multi's which helped it your structure was off though and you lacked vocab...i didnt really see any hard hitting punches or any good personals in your verse try makeing them more direct instead of babbling about him.....make them mean something....you coulda came harder....5/10 mic-aight you had really stretched lines and shit try to even out your structure and git rid of the / after your verse.....you came harder with punches and personals they were more direct and they landed....you had a lot of multis in your verse which is nice to see.....your vocab topped wicked's cuz you had more that he did......8/10 return the favor...links in sig v/.MictoriouS. peace~1 |
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Uppin this bitch .. !!!! ................. |
Voted For: .MictoriouS.
punches=mic mettas= mic structure=wicked perosnals=tie wordplay=mic wicked ya need ta make ya verse a bit more complex coz at the moment all ya doin is rhymin off one one word..ite it sounds orite in some songs, but ta elevated mcees its just wack. Learn some multie schemes n youll kick ass n mictorious, i dunno y ya putting al dem fucked up captions in ya verses, i mean its not gunna make it sound better, just made it harder a read. Ya last punch was ill ^^, but the rest didnt do shit. I'll press ya soul like tightend sandels LMFAO ^^, keep it up man. my vote= mictorious |
goddamn...guess i was on an off day or somethin, i knew it wasnt my best shit but dayum! its aight tho, good battle MIC, guess ill have to come harder next time... i underestemated you and it bit me in the ass... uppin it
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LOl ... nice battle ..
i keystyled that shit too .. but yeh .. ggood battlee |
Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN
Mic decent punches structure was gay flow was gay too vocab was aight overall u had a wack drop structure was too fuckin stretched flow couldn't match up wit tha structure.. elevate more kid... 1/10 [b]Wicked punches were decent structure was aight (don't center it not unless it is a topical battle) flow was pretty decent vocab was nice overall yo drop was good.. 5/10 Return Tha Favor http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=159346 |
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