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Kawn Flixx 11-26-04 09:43 PM

'Motionless' (RB crossover)
 
Motionless

I'm Still Holding The Track
everyday..I say to myself one day.
its never gonna come
everyday Is someday
another brake I won't make
another path I won't trace
another Train That Come late..
I'm Holding me Back..


I still see the track I made..mixtape outlined in tape..
printed in black marker..and states..by Indeph and Grace..
I guess that's the Fate..I guess I'm the one with just
a napkin and a plate..no fork or spoon..a forklift to move
Still riding my bike..classmates can take the lack
gotta pay for that..then pay for that..then pay for that..
oh shit,I gotta make a RAP!!!..Vocal Records said they take it back
how you gonna be a Indian Giver..when you still in the business
how you gonna be bitter..when I ghostwrit for you in minutes
and I did it plenty..And now I'm banished??and you smiled
when they say you had some talent..I'm telling everyone out there
if it looks to perfect it probably is..and if you surpassed me
then you probably big..

I'm Still Holding The Track
everyday..I say to myself one day.
its never gonna come
everyday Is someday
another brake I won't make
another path I won't trace
another Train That Come late..
I'm Holding me Back..


god damn..how many songs have been saved on the hard drive
written in the notebook..and still my tapes not priced..with no hooks
help me..K solo spelled me..on his 1st track released..go look
Its in his old book..With my baby picture In it..its funny
because we he quit..I was beggining..fuck DMX.he stole his printins
the difference..between K and me..is no ones payin me
then why is it..that I stay in peace..and they stayin G..yo..
I been meaning to grow..the wall marks been surpassed..
I grew Verticle..but inside I'm still in past..Rap's in my grasp..
I mean damn..if you can just see me now..see my frown..
and then see my town..yuo would understand..why I wanna get out..
I just don't see why my raps aint been used yet..I sidelined them
because I made a new set..

I'm Still Holding The Track
everyday..I say to myself one day.
its never gonna come
everyday Is someday
another brake I won't make
another path I won't trace
another Train That Come late..
I'm Holding me Back..


-Indeph

Kawn Flixx 11-26-04 11:36 PM

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DrasticMeasureZ 11-26-04 11:39 PM

I still see the track I made..mixtape outlined in tape..
printed in black marker..and states..by Indeph and Grace..
I guess that's the Fate..I guess I'm the one with just
a napkin and a plate..no fork or spoon..a forklift to move
Still riding my bike..classmates can take the lack
gotta pay for that..then pay for that..then pay for that..
oh shit,I gotta make a RAP!!!..Vocal Records said they take it back
how you gonna be a Indian Giver..when you still in the business
how you gonna be bitter..when I ghostwrit for you in minutes
and I did it plenty..And now I'm banished??and you smiled
when they say you had some talent..I'm telling everyone out there
if it looks to perfect it probably is..and if you surpassed me
then you probably big..
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ON THIS PART I FELT THE SAME THING ON ALL YA OPENMICS DOPE FLOW. DOPE VOCAB'Z..........GOOD CREATIVE SHIT HERE MAYNE I LIKE DIS PART



















god damn..how many songs have been saved on the hard drive
written in the notebook..and still my tapes not priced..with no hooks
help me..K solo spelled me..on his 1st track released..go look
Its in his old book..With my baby picture In it..its funny
because we he quit..I was beggining..fuck DMX.he stole his printins
the difference..between K and me..is no ones payin me
then why is it..that I stay in peace..and they stayin G..yo..
I been meaning to grow..the wall marks been surpassed..
I grew Verticle..but inside I'm still in past..Rap's in my grasp..
I mean damn..if you can just see me now..see my frown..
and then see my town..yuo would understand..why I wanna get out..
I just don't see why my raps aint been used yet..I sidelined them
because I made a new set..
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ON THIS PART PRETTY MUCH THE SAME BUT WITH MORE EMOTIONS BEING ADDED HOMIE........NICE


YO U HAD NICE VOCAB'Z...........NICE FLOW................GOOD CREATIVE SHIT...............NICE EMOTIONS............9/10


YO DROP AN FEEDBACK IN MY OPEN MIC

YES INDEPTH IAM TRYING TO BE LIKE U LOL DROPPIN OM'Z DAILY LOL

"DISS TO THIS KID AT SKOOL-SMOKE"

THATS DA NAME OF MY OM CHECK IT FEED IT FEEL IT

Kawn Flixx 11-26-04 11:43 PM

LOL..Quoted....

DrasticMeasureZ 11-26-04 11:44 PM

^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Muwhahahahahahahahahahahah Aiiiiight Fam Be Nice

Kawn Flixx 11-27-04 12:13 AM

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Macca 11-27-04 12:22 AM

Indeph you a male or female..............

Kawn Flixx 11-27-04 12:24 AM

shit..BOYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

teknikal vuez 11-27-04 12:38 AM

Good Drop I Was Feeling It The Whole Way..

Macca 11-27-04 12:44 AM

BOYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY Aw kay my bad forthinking youur a girl. lol srry.

Kawn Flixx 11-27-04 02:57 PM

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Parallel 11-27-04 03:12 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Legend
BOYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY Aw kay my bad forthinking youur a girl. lol srry.


lmao............ :laugh:

Parallel 11-27-04 03:13 PM

this was a good drop 8.4/10...i should give you this instead of food for thought for the open mic fo the mounth....good job homes;)

Crack Mike 11-27-04 03:42 PM

indepth...... that shit was dope.... i could feel what you were sayin.... shit.... man that hits close to home.... just props to indepth

streetryda 11-27-04 07:19 PM

damn man nice drop had lots of emotion nie vocab and great flow.....your always on top of your game no matter what u write.....
keep it up fam....9/10

peace~1


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