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~Luciano~ 11-26-04 10:40 PM

*Troop* vs Mike Hawk
 
Battle Rules:

8- Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

No dr

3-0 Ko

1st Ko'd ya boy...Your turn Bitch

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 11-28-04 at 10:40 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

System 11-26-04 10:43 PM

Mike Hawk has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-26-04 10:43 PM.

Pop Lotty 11-26-04 10:48 PM

I break through *Troop* armour, pound ya steal
When the punches hit, stars will be around u f'real
Crew will never be good, ya'll got no hopes
You worse at runnin AI than the new 76'ers coach
Nobody actually likes u, you just lettin niggas bone ya neck
Yeh, your the problem...that caused RV to get no respect
Don't know what else to say, but this kid is gay...
Only reason he goes 8, is cuz his verses wont get 10's anyway

All personals...dont fuckin get it...don't vote.

Pop Lotty 11-26-04 11:00 PM

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 11-28-04 at 10:40 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

System 11-26-04 11:50 PM

*Troop* has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-26-04 11:50 PM.

~Luciano~ 11-27-04 12:00 AM


..1st Socrates..Now u....Feel me Bitch Boy

Your affiliated with comin in second best like fatkids running a Whole Lap
Hawk could Hi Five James Brown & he still cant provide a Soul Clap

Ya skill matches ya Counterpart Socrates no wonder u were Left Shook
This Disaterous Like walking a tightrope with a Cast on your Left Foot

Your constantly gettin it confused as if your one of the 1st true Vet'z
Mikes finally associated with bein the Shame of Jerzz.. like the Net'z

Rb's 1st Vet rejection so u came over to try 2 Discontinue ya D-Nyle
Got confused with talent. since then uve been gettin clapped E-Style

....And this was 2 eazy..No effort needed....Nuff Said..


Hes alwayz talkin bout gettin Soul Clapped
He reps E-Style

Logic The Goonie 11-27-04 12:02 AM

This was feedback posted for *Troop*
 
This was quite possibly the shittiest verse iv'e ever read in my life, vote mike.

headgames 11-27-04 12:21 AM

Voted For: Mike Hawk

Shabba:
I break through *Troop* armour, pound ya steal
When the punches hit, stars will be around u f'real
lmao this was nice 8/10
Crew will never be good, ya'll got no hopes
You worse at runnin AI than the new 76'ers coach
lol good job here too well done 8/10
Nobody actually likes u, you just lettin niggas bone ya neck
Yeh, your the problem...that caused RV to get no respect
lmao once again liking this 8/10
Don't know what else to say, but this kid is gay... <bad rhyme sceme
Only reason he goes 8, is cuz his verses wont get 10's anyway
lmao nice one here 9/10

Trooper:
Your affiliated with comin in second best like fatkids running a Whole Lap
Hawk could Hi Five James Brown & he still cant provide a Soul Clap
lmao ok this was good 8/10
Ya skill matches ya Counterpart Socrates no wonder u were Left Shook
This Disaterous Like walking a tightrope with a Cast on your Left Foot
ok good similie but got no punch 7/10
Your constantly gettin it confused as if your one of the 1st true Vet'z
Mikes finally associated with bein the Shame of Jerzz.. like the Net'z
not bad I guess 7.5
Rb's 1st Vet rejection so u came over to try 2 Discontinue ya D-Nyle
Got confused with talent. since then uve been gettin clapped E-Style
7/10

Troop you lost, put more effort in your battles man, this shit was lackadaisical

Overall troop: 29.5/40

Overall shabba: 31/50

FlowIntelligent. 11-27-04 12:41 AM

Voted For: Mike Hawk

Troop:

for the first time ever you actually threw a punch and it was pretty good... your opener was your best punch well it was ur only good punch actually... u keep using your same style and its not working get personal on him research battles and look at the punches and set ups... mike hawk good verse.. opener was dope 2nd and 3rd bar were hott last bar was weak and stretched

v/ MH

~Luciano~ 11-27-04 12:54 AM

Purre dr's...ya gone feel sorry 4 em huh

his structure was fucked
and his punches were simple

Logic The Goonie 11-27-04 01:07 AM

I seriously want to beat your ass.

In real life.

You're too much of a fucking idiot to be human.

How was he simple?

You compared the "Netz" to jersey?

Jesus Christ I almost didnt get that!

His structure?

Structure only matters when it comes to stretching..

..and YOU were the one strechting!

Jesus Troop, I swear, if I ever come to that little faggot ass city of your's

I'll woop your fucking ass.

With bats, and i'll have a ski mask on.

Like you.

Ya fake bitch.

-E-Thug 4 Lyfe

~Luciano~ 11-27-04 01:10 AM

go play with your lil hawai'n brother

DrasticMeasureZ 11-27-04 01:18 AM

This was feedback posted for *Troop*
 
i cant vote bu t that nigga mike got ripppppppppppppppppped

Sik Wit It 11-27-04 01:32 AM

Voted For: *Troop*

Your affiliated with comin in second best like fatkids running a Whole Lap
Hawk could Hi Five James Brown & he still cant provide a Soul Clap
6/10…nice closer
Ya skill matches ya Counterpart Socrates no wonder u were Left Shook
This Disaterous Like walking a tightrope with a Cast on your Left Foot
5/10…pretty nice punch
Your constantly gettin it confused as if your one of the 1st true Vet'z
Mikes finally associated with bein the Shame of Jerzz.. like the Net'z
5/10…decent hea
Rb's 1st Vet rejection so u came over to try 2 Discontinue ya D-Nyle
Got confused with talent. since then uve been gettin clapped E-Style
6/10…nice closer
nice punches…were hard & connected
ok persona’s up in there…nice structure too
nice flow w/ tha struct. & pretty decent vocab.



I break through *Troop* armour, pound ya steal
When the punches hit, stars will be around u f'real
4/10…okay last line was a no…
Crew will never be good, ya'll got no hopes
You worse at runnin AI than the new 76'ers coach
3/10…played…
Nobody actually likes u, you just lettin niggas bone ya neck
Yeh, your the problem...that caused RV to get no respect
5/10…pretty decent
Don't know what else to say, but this kid is gay...
Only reason he goes 8, is cuz his verses wont get 10's anyway
5/10…decent closer
sum okay punches…structure was okay…vocab was
decent…flow was aight…overall nice drop tho…

Pop Lotty 11-27-04 02:17 AM

Ayo....This has been going on too long.

This muthafucka Skriptz man, why do you always end up voting on my battles?
I mean, we already established that we don't like each other...and this has been going on for what, 3 battles? I don't see you asking anyone to return favors...so there has to be a reason why you keep doing that...oh wait...HATE VOTES.

And guess what, I'm gonna go vote on your battle right now nigga, hate, hate, hate. And explain it.
Fuckin' faggot.


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