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Massive 07-07-02 05:51 PM

Week 6 3 Way Action (0-0) Lil Dallas Vs (0-0) S.t.a.r. Vs (0-0) Guillotine
 
VERSES DUE BY FRIDAY, TRY AND GET THEM UP BY WEDNESDAY IF YOU CAN.


15 LINE MAX FOR EACH


VOTE ON AT LEAST 3 OTHER BATTLES,OR 3 VOTES DEDUCTED FROM YOUR BATTLE..


MAKE THIS HOT!!

Mystery~murdera 07-07-02 08:37 PM

checkin in

kadafi 07-08-02 02:17 PM

checkin in

Mystery~murdera 07-08-02 02:23 PM

yo go ahead and spit when you're ready

kadafi 07-08-02 02:53 PM

only jus seen this ish...
 
shit kid it's only monday, i got till friday...

tell you what i'll drop mah ish tomorrow.

lol, gotta write it first.

S.T.A.R. 07-09-02 01:31 PM

i guess im checkin in ill have mine in by friday 2

kadafi 07-11-02 02:42 PM

Yo…

Dallas a lil state in my world, an a star just a big ball of gas/
Y’all be all in my ass cause y’all be failing to get past /
Either you diss me back an you’ll be givin head to a glock/
I cock and shoot quick, grab da loot, shoot up tha block/
Your insults come out like calling me a son of a mother/
They discover if they had sense they’d be runnin for cover/
Son, you better run, can’t shoot cause you can’t cock a gun/
Another win for me, baggin two for tha price of one /
Its fun, to see you try beat me, you both beneath me/
Try to beef with me, you realise ya can’t defeat me/
just meet me on the streets, I’ll kill all your peeps/
the internet, it aint a video game, there aint no cheats/
cause even if ya biting, Im fighting you off with my shit/
If it was like it was bent of a skit of some classic rap hit/
When I spit my verse it comes first cause its sick…

Mystery~murdera 07-11-02 08:27 PM

Comin at S.T.A.R. first

The fire I emit on this keyboard is gonna burn your hands//
Repitwa's fault, I know this battle was not in your plans//
And S.T.A.R. like a bitch I'll slap you into the corner, when you wake, you gonna find yo moms done disowned ya'//
cuz now you got a brotha', Lil D' in the creep, while you sleep done boned her//
I split you, hit you so hard this shit is a sin//
I change ya fate, across ya chin comes the strength of ten men//
smack both of y'a'll so hard it'll disfigure your face//
dissappearin without a trace, both of y'a'll, in an unmarked coffin//
See what you thinkin, but it'll be too late when they hear you coughin, on Guillotine's cum//
What type of name is Guillotine, you musta couldn't wait to sound cheap//
Lick wit ya tongue, swallow wit ya throat and take heads wit ya teeth??//
Fuckin faggot, suck dick, suck dick right//
lick and swallow but no bites//
nigga' comin at me wit Nintendo lines, betta get to school, get some knowledge, enhance yo mind//
I could hit you wit way more lines, but I'm bouncin cuz on the real battlin some bitches ain't worth my time//

yo i had to edit this to cut it down but i ain't change no words.

Mystery~murdera 07-12-02 11:01 AM

yo was it 15 towards each person or 15 total? I thought I got 15 at Guillotine and then 15 at S.T.A.R.

kadafi 07-12-02 03:09 PM

^15 in total, and your shit was 24 lines long...you need to edit lines out.

S.T.A.R. 07-12-02 04:37 PM

Hit Me up on votes and feedback on verse...
This Is My Lyrics for this week...

Freedom or death? , I give niggas a reason to sweat//
It's no test, lyrically its like I'm seen as the best//
Read between the lines, ya'll cant rhyme like Wyclef//
I spit shit quick,rip off fat lips that got hot-breath//
Bad luck,keep it up flamin bars givin yall a hot-flash//
Only time I do wack anything is when smackin ya moms ass//
Dealin' a lyrical killin to lil'dallas like the NBA's Mavericks//
Got rap AIDS,change ya name from lil' dallas to lil'have-in-it//
Then bring pain to haters like a dying dyke in labor//
Born a natural disaster they should call me ill nature//
It's no fun if ya'll try'na run from my lyrics with no legs//
Ya weak rhymes f/ will smith couldnt make me "nod my head"//

Mystery~murdera 07-13-02 12:49 AM

up lemme see some votes now

Mystery~murdera 07-13-02 04:06 AM

up for votes

kadafi 07-13-02 10:23 AM

up

Mystery~murdera 07-13-02 03:16 PM

up


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