crews
 

iv been in a few that won and lostdone payin my do's
and costs no im the boss hipnotic hype to us thats sounds aight
in the middle of a battle and still on the open mic
my flows are ubtouchable but i have to face it
punks like 2 by 4 need a new face lift but ill save that for a battle
where ill shake and ill rattle him fuckin little pussy aint got no hair on his chin
jumped in a battle with him but not win just to humliate him but you know what he did got all off his freinds to vote yeah that ryhm wasnt the best but if i seen him on the street itll be two to his chest

not to good, you need to structure it better, use better rhyme's and keep your bar's even to help the flow.
4/10
return the feed,link's in sig

lol, u jacked a line from me from dat was only IIGHT, it could have been way better, return da favor on ma open mic

elevate some
better lyrix usage

u gettin there slowly but surely

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