Tstorm vs Elusiv G
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-27-04 at 01:48 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Tstorm has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-27-04 01:26 PM.

Elusiv G has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-27-04 01:38 PM.

Shit rhymes is the accosiation wit T-storm, nuns read ur rhymes 2 fall asleep in their dorms
my rhymes are blazin, yours are just simply luke-warm//

Im surprised u set dis up after my reply, in Front Lines
Cos u winnin is more improbable than seein 2pac, on saturday night Live//

U tried to come hard in ur battle against InGage, u came wit no rage
Ur Lyrics were ugly,wit his 1st line u were already upstaged//

Ur rhyme structure is derformed, elongated and out of place
The deformaties are kinda funny, similar to Micheal Jackson's face//

T-storm, learn how to perform, go home, elevate and reform
u been merked,hit with a meteor swarm, 2 battle me, re-fill the application form//

Yo i came weak in dis rhyme but of a shit freestyle but fuk it, holla at me, honest votes are ALWAYS returned. Peace

see u tried to get in the council...but they wouldnt have you back..
because dawg, only thing u exclusive at is being exclusively wack
how u there in the first place?..davinci must be blinded
id like ta say theres hope for u..but i aint that open-minded!
handicapped or retarted?...id guess both the way you spit
flushin ya lyrics down the toilet..coulnt put flow to ya shit!
herb just throws words together...in the hope sumthin hits
you couldnt make a punch if u were an epileptic throwin fits!
fuck it, i dont have to cum hard to get rid of exclusive-g..
this guy got me more "board" than the hardwood under me!

exp- last bar...board/floorboards ...get it.

Haaha U Dumbass Ma Name Is Elusiv G!!!!!!!!!!!!!! U Looked At Wrong Mc Gettin Denied By Da Council Man!!!! U Should Loose This On Default For Chattin Irrelevant Shit Bout A Different Mc!!!!!! Bad Luck Hoooommmmiieee

scared???????????????????????????lol

u also talked shit bout ingage wen i ripped him...
but whateva...no doubt ull get dickrode to the win...
get pmin.
n peace out.

y u chattin bout "scared................" and i dnt let ppl d/r me cos its jus bshit and u cnt elevate that way if u dnt loose when u post wackness, be a man, wit 4 consequences of mistakes and lest jus see how battle turns out man - even tho u cnt win now lol... Peace homie..keep elevatin, we'll re-match soon aight. Peace 1

This was feedback posted for Tstorm
 

.............................damn T-storm ..........u Got's To Do It Like That Fam................hurtful Just Hurtful

Voted For: Tstorm

punches-ts
pers-tS
structure-ts
mets-none
multtis-none
flow-ts
bars-TS wasnt streatch

TS get my vote came harder did stretch his bar EG didnt make none or his words rhymes so its 1sided TS wins no douts he get my vote came much harder and had fkiw n all that

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Voted For: Tstorm

BREAKDOWN :: remember to return the favor

Elusiv G = Your Verse Started Out Really Weak But Then Started To Form In The Body Of The Verse..
But Your Opener And Finisher Were Not That Good..

Highlights : U tried to come hard in ur battle against InGage, u came wit no rage
Ur Lyrics were ugly,wit his 1st line u were already upstaged//
Ur rhyme structure is derformed, elongated and out of place
The deformaties are kinda funny, similar to Micheal Jackson's face//

^^Iliked this part of your verse, it had good multies.. but the punches wernt that hard..

Overall : Your Verse Would Have Been Alot Harder With A Punch In your Intro Duction And Finisher.. You Probablly Would Have Eased This Out With Personals too.. Just Tryin To Help You Out..


T Storm = Your Verse Was Good From Start To Finish, I Didnt Really See Any Flaws In This Occassion..

Highlights : Your Opener.. Closer.. And Epileptic throwin fits.. LOL.. Your Verse Was Everything It Needed To Be To Take The Battle.. Good Punches And Personals..

Overall= You One Upped EG on this occasion And Took The Win.. Just Work On Your First Line So its not so filler.. It Should Comprehend With Your Second Line to Finish The Bar Hard..

Good Job..


Please Return The Favor By Hitting Up A Battle In My Sig.. Thanks..

Voted For: Tstorm

u had the punches and personals u neede to get my vote becasue this kats whole verse suycked his structure was off and line were stretched as old dudes nuts

u had my vote cuz ur opener sonned his whole verse so good job i guess return the favor please:

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Voted For: Tstorm

not a bad battle...

Elusiv, ya verse was aight...the structure was meh, so the flow was kinda off...i didnt see any personals from u...and punchwise, u were a lil lacking...u were consistent with them, but they seemed too indirect and failed to hit hard.....ya vocab was a plus tho...

Tstorm, first off, i dunno what was up with your first bar...it was a good attempt at a personal, but i think u got Elusiv mixed up with Exclusive...anyways, the structure was on point, so there was a good flow to your verse...punchwise u came real decent...u were consistent and your punches were more direct...

V/ Tstorm, for more direct/harder-hittin punches....

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