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-Rated R- 11-27-04 09:21 PM

---In The Car Freestyle---
 
dis is jus shit i was wrightin while i was inda car its pretty wack lolz fa real feedback anyway ~!i1i!~

ya daugters are like donkey farms, showin asses....
i'll bust u up so bad u cant have a open casket.....
nigga my ice so bright dat it my scare fags..
i tear tags, got spare jags, choke niggas out like airbags...
girls lookin fo my nuts, dey like Hung Squirells.....
worlds gon crazy R-kelly got 'Lloyd' lookin fo 'Young Girls'.....
i Spent half my paycheck, why'd i pick dis whore....
but i still got ice dat shine brighta den a Christmas Store....
Inc. aint shit, let me tap shanti, but i wont hurt her....
I aint Inc. but blood will spill out like backwars 'Murder'...(redruM)
im ghetto i'll freeze ya body in a cooler....
when i shine its fo a lifetime u shine bout as long as a ruler....
u aint hard dawg u only make a fake jestur....
i got 6 diff guns u can be da taste tester....
love to spoil a cat, be loyal upon my track...
u ridin ma dick, cuz u got ma name embroiderd on ya back....
fuck yall bussas, i got a hit on dis fool trust this....
n my rims constantly stop n go, like school buses...
i cop rockets, n den stop ta pop shit....
n light ya pant legs on fire till u got Hot Pockets.....


lmao feed back its pretty wack but jus holla ~!i1i!~

Parallel 11-27-04 09:31 PM

this a kool free...:)........7/10.....nothing to good stucture wasent there but good wordplay and blah....7.3/10...check my open mcis links in the sig...:)


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