proverbial intrigue
 

as i walk the dark valleys in the midst of the night i find the book of proverbs king solomon has supplied....................................an king solomon said unto me// My son,walk not thou in the way with them;refrain thy foot from their path: for their feet run to evil, and make haste to shed blood// (me) But their blood is my blood and their walk is my walk//(him)surely in vain the net is spread in the sight of any bird.And they lay wait for their own blood;they lurk privily for their own lives//(me) but how do i know thy never has before//(him) so are the ways of everyone that is greedy of gain;which taketh away the life of the owners thereof// (me)but what about thy sister?// (him)Wisdom crieth without;she ultreth her voice in the streets:she crieth in the chief place of consourse,in the openings of the gates:in the city she ultereth her words saying,How long ,ye simple ones,will ye love simplicity?and the scorners delight in their, and fools hate knowledge// (me) i dont know i am nothin but a fallen angel lookin for my wings// i have done somethings that i regret// and i have seen somethings happened that i shoulnt have let// I live life like a costly bet//but please dont give out on thee yet//(god) i will never give out on thy son,you are my child and unto you i give you love, thy shall walketh the right path leadin in my way//





ight yall i juss wanted to try sumthin different tell me what u think

:confused:

um ok

do whatever you feel is comfortable for your style

if its preaching preach

diffently different though

whats next?

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I liked it but couldn't really catch the rhyme scheme...So i guessed i liked the intro even tho it was sorta stolen and played....But then you started flowin kep your head up

RHYME SCHEME AINT ANYTHING SHE MAY SPIT DIFFERENTLY THEN ALL OF US THE CONCEPT WAS PEACE THOUGH AND THAT ALONE WITH YOUR IMADRY DESERVES PROPS THIS WAS ATLEAST A 7 OUT OF 10 MINIMUM

hey logic u know im a guy right?

NAH DONT MATTER THOUGH BUT MY BUST DUNNY I HERD SOMEONE BEFORE REFER TO YOU AS A FEMALE SO INSTEAD OF GETTING PERSONAL TO ASK I JUST ASSUMED NEVER THE LESS YOU GOT SKILLZ THAT WILL BE SLEPT ON JUST CAUSE YOUR WRITTING SCHEME BUT IF YOU CAN SPIT A VERSE TO A RHYTHM TO THIS YOU GOT MAD SKILLZ
ITS WHAT YOU SAY IN A VERSE NOT WHAT STYLE YOU SAY IT IN THIS WAS HOT AND IM EMBARASSED NOW ....LOL
I LOOK LIKE A JACK ASS !!!!!!!!!

YO I JUST CALLED ALL OF YOU OUT ON BITCH SLAPPED READ IT SO NOTHING GETS TWISTED AROUND PLEASE

i dunno that shyt was a expriment it was more of a story type thing

DID YOU PEEP MY CALL OUT

im bout to

hit me for a collab if you like

i sent u a email rie me back

i hit you up w/b