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teknikal vuez vs ..Lyrical..
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teknikal vuez has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-28-04 01:28 AM.
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..Lyrical.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-28-04 01:28 AM.
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Drop ~this wack~, wit more ~raps than bags~
and put the Trey Duece to his Chest Like A Six Pack of Abs =- You get ~bitched slapped~, for ~acting bad, you fag~ You say my punches dont hit? But you absorb every jab =- Your just a ~terrible fad~ something that ~Goes Away~ Cause Like The Flaming AK Your Also Known ~As Gay~ =- |
Then realign the stars to read “u don’t have shit on my raps”
If dick riding wasn’t breaking the rules, he’d sit on my lap Now read your sig out loud, and quickly beg for repentance Cause you can’t beat me, if u cant make a complete sentence Its easy to continue my murderous rampage, so I’m still flowin’ But I destroyed you in the first 2 lines...Why am I still going? |
Yea Thats Just A Quick Six, Not My Best But enough To make The Time Limit..
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Good Drop Playa.. This Should Be Close.. No dOubt...
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Voted For: teknikal vuez
Tek Get's This, Punch;s Simply Hit Harder and Had A Gd Witty Line At The End, Lyrical You Just Tried to use Wit all The Way Thru So No Punch's....Tek had better Wordplay and Both Of You Had Gd Vocab Lyrical-6/10 Tek- 7.3/10 RTF..Or Perish :) Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
No Doubt Uppin For More Votes on This Flaming Battle..
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Voted For: teknikal vuez
Then realign the stars to read “u don’t have shit on my raps” If dick riding wasn’t breaking the rules, he’d sit on my lap ooo shit that was good... but the rest of ya verse fell off... u thought u had him beat with 1 bar which was the best bar in this battle but u need it more to hold up in this battle which u aint bring which hurt'ed u in my eyes cuz u could of easy won with 1 more hard bar... Drop ~this wack~, wit more ~raps than bags~ and put the Trey Duece to his Chest Like A Six Pack of Abs =- that was a preety decent opener... You get ~bitched slapped~, for ~acting bad, you fag~ You say my punches dont hit? But you absorb every jab =- that was decent.... Your just a ~terrible fad~ something that ~Goes Away~ Cause Like The Flaming AK Your Also Known ~As Gay~ =- i wasnt feeling the ending nah... but u had more hard hit in this battle u had more bars that held up that was decent if u would of went with just 1 hard bar then barg the rest like lyrical then lyrical would of won but u tossed another decent bar which made me pick u... flow: even punches: tek all around better verse: tek returnt he favor of a vote.... |
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Voted For: teknikal vuez
u hit this one man nice job nice punches and nice flow man i could read this in my sleep nice jabs kidi like the opener specially lyricalls shyt was jus weak in my perspective i ddint like the flow and his punches were weaker vote on this http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=162845 |
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