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THE HYPE IS REAL vs teknikal vuez
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10-12 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 11-28-04 at 04:50 AM Must drop verse in 720 minutes after check in. |
teknikal vuez has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-28-04 03:53 AM.
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THE HYPE IS REAL has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-28-04 04:03 AM.
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Ayo
i ~scar and kill~.. with my ~palm calm on tight steel~ And put "caps to his name", to show ~the hype is real~ // believe me, ~your nill~ with ya next to ~nothin flows~ i let the ~tek blow~.. and put "ten unda ya waist" give you ~shell toes~ // you win ~hell no~, what i got to do to ~bash this fag~ cause you couldnt "Come close to me." with a ~vacinity porn mag~ // you get ~harmed bad~, how you gonna say ~Tek aint nice~ when i got the slugs "itchin for your forhead" like you ~infected with lice~ // ~expect to get viced,~ beatdown with ~punches to chest~ ~in peace you rest~ naw... just consider ~yourself blessed~ for batt~lin the best~// |
lettin you nknow that this punk is fake
couldnt get him self a fuck unless it was date rape sayin technical vews bitch please get the fuck down suck both of these/please yes yes get down on your knees shit thought you were fergi you know the black eye peas dont know why im here or im doin this sittin with the key board tryin to write a diss |
uppin for some votes.. uppin for some votes.. RISE
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Voted For: teknikal vuez
u killed this verse man i likle the opener man nice ryhmes and better punches hten this other cat man nice drop hommie keep uppin now for the win u got it vote on this http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=162845 |
Voted For: teknikal vuez
i ~scar and kill~.. with my ~palm calm on tight steel~ And put "caps to his name", to show ~the hype is real~ // believe me, ~your nill~ with ya next to ~nothin flows~ i let the ~tek blow~.. and put "ten unda ya waist" give you ~shell toes~ // ^^^^^^^^^^ ALL FLOW NO PUNCHES......DIDNT SENSE ANY BUT GOOD FLOW you win ~hell no~, what i got to do to ~bash this fag~ cause you couldnt "Come close to me." with a ~vacinity porn mag~ // you get ~harmed bad~, how you gonna say ~Tek aint nice~ when i got the slugs "itchin for your forhead" like you ~infected with lice~ // ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE WORDPLAY...PUNCHES WERE "OK" BUT THROW HARDER PUNCHES AIIIGHT FAM ~expect to get viced,~ beatdown with ~punches to chest~ ~in peace you rest~ naw... just consider ~yourself blessed~ for batt~lin the best~// ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ BLAH NOT AN GOOD CLOSA BUT GOOD FLOW THOUGH BUT DA PUNCH NAH FAM DIDNT HIT HARD lettin you nknow that this punk is fake couldnt get him self a fuck unless it was date rape sayin technical vews bitch please get the fuck down suck both of these/please yes yes get down on your knees shit thought you were fergi you know the black eye peas dont know why im here or im doin this sittin with the key board tryin to write a diss ^^^^^^^^^^^^ THAT WAS NOT AN GOOD VERSE FAM ELEVATE.........U NEED TO THROW PUNCHES WHICH I DIDNT SENSE ANY HERE AND YA FLOW IS KINDA CHOPPED UP FIX YA STRUTURE........DIS WAS NOT AN GOOD VERSE FOR AN BATTLE LIKE THIS CONCLUSION= THIS BATTLE IS KIND ONE SIDED ALTHOUGH HYPE DIDNT THROW ANY PUNCHES BUT I GOTS TO GO WITH THE PERSON WHO DID WHICH WAS VUEZ......DA KID HAD PUNCHES AND THEY WERE HARDER, HARDER FLOW TOO WHICH HYPE REALLY LACKED IN DIS BATTLE PEACE |
This was feedback posted for teknikal vuez
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Voted For: teknikal vuez
Teknikal was as his name says teknikal and obviously had harder punches which is overkill cause he needed was a decent punch to kill this punk. this is how the scoreboad stands: Wordplay:Tek Punches:Tek Personals:neither(didn't see none) Multis:Tek similies:Tek opener:tek closer:tek tek won end of story Hype either change your fuckin name or start elevating at an exstensive rate cause your shit was wack. one |
Voted For: teknikal vuez
teknikal vuez got this one! Punches were nice, flow okay, wordplay decent and well, overall nice drop! Some things were bit played but i liked it... THE HYPE IS REAL : what was that? Your rhymes were weak and so were your punches dont know why im here or im doin this sittin with the key board tryin to write a diss ^wtf? Lmao...were you high when you wrote this? Cause it wasn't good at all...flow, structure, wordplay, punches, vocab...elevate! |
thanks ma... uppin for the final vote to my side...
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Voted For: teknikal vuez
Tekinkal got this....... I enjoyed readiong your verse......... You had some good worplay..... and your rhymes were decent..... But you had some streched lines... adn that isnt good.... but .. lol.... its all good...... And your punches hit pretty hard.... adn your flow was alright io guess but your structure messed that up a lil bit... But opver all I think you diod pretty good...... Nice job... Keep it uo... Hype- You didnt do all that great......................... Alls I have to say.. is you gootta elevate.... your verse was way to short adn your linez were sterched some too.... You punches didnt reall even hit hard at all....... and your flow wasnt that good....... But alls you gotta do is elevate homie... Over all you didnt do really good.... but... no hate...... Vote/ teknikal vuez Return tha fava in tha Sig~~ |
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