Vanity
 

giving my all and getting nothing in return.
bad experiences but lesson learn.
clear blue skies and skies of gray,
but all was peaceful in the bed we lay.
heated discussions let you keep your masculitity
as you relieved to about 5 other females a different identity.
stupidity kept us together for too long
because your love was far gone.
holding you down when bars kept us apart,
but never forgetting the love that still burns in my heart.
attraction is far greater than what the eyes can see.
we became one as you took over me.
chills on my back at the sound of your voice.
one touch leaves me moist.
the kiss of death is what you dealt,
but being blind heaven is what i felt.
2 years gone down the drain,
resulting in a lifelong love ~ loving in vain.

hmm
 

dang a lot of good poets comin out...i feel kinda old now..haha...me and dimeond been on this site for a long minuete. But this was nice...i've missed a lot since i've been off tha board..much luv..God bless..1..

very touching was feeling it keep it up

I was feelin this piece, it had a nice flow to it that was just as nice as it was to read..



Don't even get me started on the imagery, that was nice all together, all in all this was a beautifully crafted piece, nice.

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sup girl ya know who this is (Cherry Pie) ye its me!!!

i didnt know ya had flow in ya! but i was feelin this piece! keep it up and stay elevatin

2 luv life 1st live luv

shyt was positive. keep postin. im lookn 4 more of dis> 1luv peace

lol..mija..you definetly got somee 2pac blood in yo veins..fa this post..keep itt up cherry

Tight ish gurl ...

Diggin ya style,
keep spittin

~1~