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FlowIntelligent. 11-28-04 10:53 PM

Pools Of Blood
 
Check It...

Living A Life Of Mystery, My Strife's History
As The Knife Blissfully, Slices, Kisses Me
And I Find Myself, In A New World, New Place
With A New Chase, A New Race
Fueled By Fued's Grace, The Pool's Laced
With Blood Of A Sinner, Which Runs Like A River
And Even Mud Isn't Thicker, The Thuds Seeming Quicker
My Heart Pounds It's Last, Beat..The Sounds Now Blast
And I Find Myself Alone.. Cuz The Clouds Have Passed

And I Scream For Help, As I Dream For Wealth
A Life I Could Have Had Within The Scheme Itself
But In Greed I Knelt..Praying For Bliss In Vain
So Now I Kiss The Pain, As My Wrists Now Drain
Sometimes I Miss That Stain, The One Of A Empty Heart
Gained From A Hefty Start, But Now Im Just Left Apart
Found A Trace Of Dust, While I Faced The Rust
On The Sharp End Of A Knife And I Laced My Trust
So I Grabbed My Wrist And I Held It Tight
And Felt It Was Right That I Died Tonight

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Parallel 11-28-04 10:55 PM

this is dope...stucture pretty good....vocabulary good...weerd this dope...8.4/10...peep my open mics they slept on

Introspect. 11-28-04 10:57 PM

Trase101: i'm still wack though:-(
SlinkyLtn85: nah lol

...:D


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