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Pools Of Blood
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Living A Life Of Mystery, My Strife's History As The Knife Blissfully, Slices, Kisses Me And I Find Myself, In A New World, New Place With A New Chase, A New Race Fueled By Fued's Grace, The Pool's Laced With Blood Of A Sinner, Which Runs Like A River And Even Mud Isn't Thicker, The Thuds Seeming Quicker My Heart Pounds It's Last, Beat..The Sounds Now Blast And I Find Myself Alone.. Cuz The Clouds Have Passed And I Scream For Help, As I Dream For Wealth A Life I Could Have Had Within The Scheme Itself But In Greed I Knelt..Praying For Bliss In Vain So Now I Kiss The Pain, As My Wrists Now Drain Sometimes I Miss That Stain, The One Of A Empty Heart Gained From A Hefty Start, But Now Im Just Left Apart Found A Trace Of Dust, While I Faced The Rust On The Sharp End Of A Knife And I Laced My Trust So I Grabbed My Wrist And I Held It Tight And Felt It Was Right That I Died Tonight ~!1!~ |
this is dope...stucture pretty good....vocabulary good...weerd this dope...8.4/10...peep my open mics they slept on
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Trase101: i'm still wack though:-(
SlinkyLtn85: nah lol ...:D |
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