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Introspect vs Socrates
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6 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 11-29-04 at 06:50 AM Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in. |
Introspect has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-29-04 04:55 AM.
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like oragamics you just fold up they dont laugh cause your rhymes filled wit hoo HA'S.. legend?you dont exist like mortal-comics rhymes dont hold up like your moms bras.. im "eatin..." his rhymes "ass" like r kelly lyrically he aint screamin rape!.. beatin his ass turnin colors like contrast..cause his lips always open like paris in her tape kid couldnt flow on a water bike..his life explained in just one link... he got the def to laugh outloud by spitin on tha mic..he steady *ridin low*but forgot tha INC low riders inc was his former crew a herbish one... |
You seriously can't write 18 lines?
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Socrates has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-29-04 05:44 AM.
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Intro tryin make it in the game?Will never you fuckin lame
By the time I post you'll prolly have ANOTHER new name Him and *Troop* be faggot partners, and love the same Troop is gunna make it in the game...since intro IS the game I'm done with a short verse, fuck Intro ya gettin kinda savvy How are you not gay with a close-up of men's lips in ya avy? -Soc |
This was feedback posted for Socrates
LOL ..............LOL........some more ...LOL
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ROFL soc ROFL wtf was that man ROFL...............
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Voted For: Introspect
Socrates Intro tryin make it in the game?Will never you fuckin lame By the time I post you'll prolly have ANOTHER new name ^ Lol nice personal in the opener Him and *Troop* be faggot partners, and love the same Troop is gunna make it in the game...since intro IS the game ^ More a diss on Troop but again another personal I'm done with a short verse, fuck Intro ya gettin kinda savvy How are you not gay with a close-up of men's lips in ya avy? ^ Gay line played punch...could've been much better Overall Soc you probably hate 6 liners as much as me it don't really let you say much but you got 2 bars of good personals and finished wit a played punch...flow & structure was good but apparantly to you they don't matter but i thought i'd comment on that rhyming was good...6.5/10 Introspect like oragamics you just fold up they dont laugh cause your rhymes filled wit hoo HA'S.. legend?you dont exist like mortal-comics rhymes dont hold up like your moms bras.. ^ 2 different rhymes in there nice punch good opener hoo ha's lmao crazy im "eatin..." his rhymes "ass" like r kelly lyrically he aint screamin rape!.. beatin his ass turnin colors like contrast..cause his lips always open like paris in her tape ^ Lol decent punch again the hidden eaten ass bit too quite good kid couldnt flow on a water bike..his life explained in just one link... he got the def to laugh outloud by spitin on tha mic..he steady *ridin low*but forgot tha INC ^ Nice closer punch/personal/wordplay good closer Overall Intro your verse had more punches personal at the end was good flow & struc was cool but Soc's was better on that account...but your disses were harder hitting the hoo ha's bit made me laugh i think you were better in this verse more punches and they were fresher...anything to work on next time would prolly be vocab but you got this so... Good battle peoples...V/Introspect |
You fucking people disgust me.
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why because their not voting for you soc?lmao chill lil man
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No.
Because they have no dignity. And neither do you. How can you sleep at night? |
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Blah @ you i don't need to explain myself i did in the link below or jus up this page...you don't like it...take it up wit Strobe... http://community.rapverse.com/showp...290&postcount=9 |
This was feedback posted for Socrates
whoa socrates got murderd...holy......................
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This was feedback posted for Socrates
jus checkin them..................................
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