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Mad Dog 11-29-04 10:25 AM

M-Dog vs ...Wicked One...
 
Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No d/r, shitty votes or Hate votes
3-0 = KO

Minimum posts to vote: 350

Check in by: 12-02-04 at 10:25 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Win by 3-0 KO

System 11-29-04 10:26 AM

...Wicked One... has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-29-04 10:26 AM.

System 11-29-04 12:03 PM

M-Dog has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-29-04 12:03 PM.

Mad Dog 11-30-04 07:26 AM

Let The Whoring Begin...

Kids got hunger but u'll get left eaten......like midday lunches,
& fuck if you think ya tough u bout as hard as soaked up sponges,

U lost this fight light a joint want the proof check the quote & see,
Quote:
Originally Posted by ...Wicked One
He is right He does have a point He is telling the truth And i am out peace


Yo where u goin? ya wackness will forever send ya to the wrong destination,
How'd u think u'd gain talent from jackin avy's from my boy Premination**,

Readin lines from the old times jus left ya rhymes flabby like Cellulite,
Kids got no mind thought of the town bike* met her & tried to sell-his-ride,

How can you have 'Fury'? ya change of names don't change the fact u still tame,
Ya lame ya rhymes like a 24/7 Migrane the pains always stayin the same,

Whoring Over


*Town Bike = Prostitute it's slang
**same avy

.Wicked One. 12-02-04 12:05 AM

A little late to the battle, either way I'll be the victor...
Strangle you with words resemblin friction of boa constrictors...
With a gentle-kiss,i could make your girl love me tonight...
But that aint right,it'd be like 'britney' doin a collab wit Obie Trice...
My mind so subliminal that your kind cant even measure up to mine...
U could kick my shit wit nikes,& still be unable to check-my-ryhmes...
Refraining from dope text blessed with hope ness to artillery to bomb vets...
Yet thru ya words you make non-sense imagery content?...
My verses are above morbit shit...
While your style"anicent" like it was wrote before the stars first orbited...

Mad Dog 12-02-04 09:23 AM

uppin this ma fuckin thread 4 them ma fuckin votes

Mad Dog 12-02-04 11:39 AM

uppin this ma fuckin thread 4 them ma fuckin votes

Wickedclown 12-02-04 11:53 AM

Voted For: M-Dog

aight yo this was a pretty tight battle yall... both of you came pretty hard and i gotta respect that... imma give ya my break down of things.

Wickedone- aight you had pretty tight flow, structure could use a little work (the ... kinda messes things up), punches and personals were there but could have hit harder. shit was a little creative and thats always good... heres ya best line :

A little late to the battle, either way I'll be the victor...
Strangle you with words resemblin friction of boa constrictors...

good opener there... overall imma give this verse a 5/10


M-dogg... good verse homie! not the best ive seen you do but it was good. had good wordplay and flow was tight. had good use of punches and personals, i like the whoring theme and shit, that was pretty tight... good creativity and wordplay, heres ya best line:

How can you have 'Fury'? ya change of names don't change the fact u still tame,
Ya lame ya rhymes like a 24/7 Migrane the pains always stayin the same,

great closer right there ^^^^^^^^... over all imma give this verse a 7.5/10

overall this was a pretty good battle... both of yall came pretty hard and ya gotta respect that shit... but in the end M-dogg wins this one. now no hate at all to Wickedone, ya came hard and did ya thing and i respect that to tha fullest but it was M-Doggs battle... no hate homie just the way i see it

good battle by both!!!!!!!!


VOTE- M-Dogg

La Cosa Nostra 12-02-04 12:18 PM

Voted For: M-Dog

M-Dog took the battle easily.. His verse took it in almost every department. Wicked one, try working on using punchlines and mixing them in with personals..

M-Dog, I seen you drop better then this, but it was still good enough for a KO most definatly. Good battle.

Peace.

Mad Dog 12-03-04 04:26 AM

Damn jus one more uppin for the K.O...............

Mad Dog 12-03-04 02:57 PM

uppin this........................................

Mad Dog 12-04-04 08:03 AM

Uppin this ma fuckin thread 4 them ma fuckin votes

Mad Dog 12-06-04 04:28 AM

uppin this ma fuckin thread 4 them ma fuckin votes

Mad Dog 12-06-04 09:16 AM

1 More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Mad Dog 12-07-04 04:05 AM

What The Fuck Vote!...............................


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