Lyrikal Dizaster & Madd Professor(Killer Collab)
 

no pun intended *killer collab* 30 bars give props Ld=Lyrikal Dizaster MP=Madd professor LOOK OUT FOR PART 2

LD
its funny how when people hear the sound of "click" they turn sick//
cover your chick, kinda shyt u hear like thunda make u jump quick//

MP
rip a slick two timin' prick in two, go ahead, call me homophobic/
i got OJ's knife waitin' to slit a throat or open it/

LD
your hopin it, you may die fast or go away slow/
you never know, how long u can keep blood flow//

MP
i'ma encrypt my name in skulls wherever i go/
fictionally script dog tags on to severd heads, and give 'em out with lycos/
spill blood like the shrill tongues in mouths that let out chilled screams of mercy/
but i won't give it, i'm a madd murdering rapper named Mr. Controversy/

LD
madd professor and ld we "professin" the lesson of death//
you dont have much left, so grab ur last grasps of breath//
"the good die young" well then i guess i dont qualify as good//
im die'n late, just like most human beings should//

MP
me 'n' this kid be a two MC terrorist group/
lyrics like spikes with spear tips, death to kids isn't a fluke/
when i flow its like its not even hydro/
its burning MC's hearts, fuck the •madd•, i'm •Professor•pyro•/

LD
we lied yo, we aint gonna give easy death its strait to the head//
someone call the med,and bring the fed, this kats dead//
died slowly with a bullet in his chest, he even wore a vest//
well thats just messed, how tha fuck are we gonna tell the rest//

MP
we leave dead bodies piled like they were in huddles/
leaving torn limbs next to a blood puddles/
that's the rest of this shit put to the stress of just being the best when we killin'/
so fuck a hater, fuck a herb, fuck, we spillin' whoever ain't feelin'/

LD
like drug dealin we sell death in "ounce quarter or half cee's//
trick please, get on your knees and listen to my gun sneeze//
we givin killz to ya'll bitches, like cats and rats//
we kill snitches, hode our shyt, even under door mats//

WACK

ur whole crews FUCKEN wack

fuck up you hater dpliff pussy to battle

never mind, i edited this cuz i ain't carry beef

peace

sorta difficult to comment on this cos there wasnt much there to criticise but nuttin much to applaud either. i liked the interchangin but neither of yas really took full advantage. It wasnt wack but ya really need to just liven it up a bit and get sum more vocab. still did the job (i aint hatin on this piece) check any o mine aight cuz chill

yeah like that other guy said, it was a good piece but yall need to up on vacab. cuz it really have my attention.
holla
one

aight i got u but it was a freestyle just real quick back n forth part 2 is gonna be what u need to read

hot drop from both of ya. secially madd, for staying up with ld with wordplay. ya elevatin madd quickly. stay up both of ya. uppin for the famlla.

joey

With a better topic, this could have been more impressive. As it is now, it's decent, but the topic's kind of played, and there's not much to separate it from the other rhymes like it. There were some hot lines, and the interplay between the two emcees was solid. The flow was pretty good too. Not many multis, but you can't always expect that in a cypher.

Quote of Note:
trick please, get on your knees and listen to my gun sneeze
I kind of liked that.

In any case, keep doing your thing. No beef. Just saying what's on my mind.

Peace

I liked the Punches n mutls froM bouth mCs keeP inproveN shit was iLL