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PntBlnkDistnce 11-29-04 05:41 PM

PntBlnkDistnce vs wreckk
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-29-04 at 06:41 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

System 11-29-04 05:43 PM

Wreckk has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-29-04 05:43 PM.

System 11-29-04 05:44 PM

PntBlnkDistnce has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-29-04 05:44 PM.

Wreckk 11-29-04 05:57 PM

Wreck Going To EAT-your-KIDNEY And My Rhymes Are Torchin Flames On Point li
ke HEAT-in-SIDNEY//(think olympics)
They'll send me To Jail For Battery On POINT The Way Wreck-o-nize BEATS-these-WHITNEYS//(bobby jackson beat his wife whitney)

^^ Warm UP^^

Wreck Eat Ya Fist Up So You Cant Throw A Punch/
And I Call You A Heavy Meal But Your Legs Were Lunch/

Wow Call Ya Self Hot How You Cant Spell Ya Name Right/
Cuz I'll Hang Ya To Crosses Like Jesus So Show Him The Light/

Wreck Is Gonna GRABBZ-the-TECKK And You'll Be Missing Your Esophogas Like I STABB-your-NECKK<::>
iM dOing an Operation but sorry you'll Be MissiNg Ya PeNis Like LABBZ-on-SHREKK<::>


Ya Go Fam

PntBlnkDistnce 11-29-04 06:12 PM

i didnt call this battle wreckk prolly just wated a loss
this bitch ask heads or tails,when i said he was gettin tossed
your a pussy a fake, ill leave you merked-and-soft
only time this faggot 'hits hard' is when hes 'jerkin-off'
ill devour you, your cowardly ways dont effect-me
usin a 'steam roller' is the only way youd ever 'impress-peeps'
your one dumb motherfucker who aint worth a dime
like 'throwin out watches' your just a 'waste of time'
i know you wish you never battled me but its too late faggot
im packing punches and they don’t come in Kool-Aid packets
ya flow is garbage son my rhymes is unconcievable
you beating me is like Drag Queen Nuns in church..Unbelivable

PntBlnkDistnce 11-29-04 06:15 PM

uppin for more feed comon boys get it hoppin now vote it up

PntBlnkDistnce 11-29-04 06:35 PM

andy one gonna vote on this piece cmon homies hook us up

SixX da FinisH 11-29-04 07:30 PM

Voted For: PntBlnkDistnce

chea.. pnt definitely got this one.. had me laughin the whole verse.. dope.. punches was on wit the flo... vocab was nice... n ya lines were fresh.. thas wat got you this...

i know you wish you never battled me but its too late faggot
im packing punches and they don’t come in Kool-Aid packets

^^AHA!!!
damn.. merkin shyt here mang... tight structure.. on point
v/pntblnkdistnce
~1~

Wreckk 11-29-04 07:32 PM

Uppin For Some More Votes ................................................

PntBlnkDistnce 11-29-04 07:36 PM

uppin for votes homeslicess hook it up in here we need some votes

DrasticMeasureZ 11-29-04 07:53 PM

Voted For: PntBlnkDistnce

Wreck Going To EAT-your-KIDNEY And My Rhymes Are Torchin Flames On Point li
ke HEAT-in-SIDNEY//(think olympics)
They'll send me To Jail For Battery On POINT The Way Wreck-o-nize BEATS-these-WHITNEYS//(bobby jackson beat his wife whitney)
^^^^^^^^^^ OK FLOW DA PUNCH IT WASNT NUTTIN SPECIAL KINDA SEEN THAT BEFORE BUT AN OK PUNCH


Wreck Eat Ya Fist Up So You Cant Throw A Punch/
And I Call You A Heavy Meal But Your Legs Were Lunch/
^^^^^^^^^^^ GOOD WORDPLAY DA PUNCH WAS EH OK



Wow Call Ya Self Hot How You Cant Spell Ya Name Right/
Cuz I'll Hang Ya To Crosses Like Jesus So Show Him The Light/
^^^^^^^^^^^ DATS AN GOOD PUNCH NICE FAM



Wreck Is Gonna GRABBZ-the-TECKK And You'll Be Missing Your Esophogas Like I STABB-your-NECKK<::>
iM dOing an Operation but sorry you'll Be MissiNg Ya PeNis Like LABBZ-on-SHREKK<::>
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ HA NICE DECENT CLOSA I LIKE THIS PUNCH GOOD


OVERALL- YA VERSE HAD AN LIL WORDPLAY AND OK PUNCHES DA CLOSA WAS GOOD PUNCH NICE AND DECENT FAM








i didnt call this battle wreckk prolly just wated a loss
this bitch ask heads or tails,when i said he was gettin tossed
your a pussy a fake, ill leave you merked-and-soft
only time this faggot 'hits hard' is when hes 'jerkin-off'
^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE GOOD FLOW AND DECENT PUNCHES


ill devour you, your cowardly ways dont effect-me
usin a 'steam roller' is the only way youd ever 'impress-peeps'
your one dumb motherfucker who aint worth a dime
like 'throwin out watches' your just a 'waste of time'
^^^^^^^ NICE WORDPLAY ON THAT ONE...........NOT AN EH GOOD PUNCH THOUGH BUT IT WAS AN OK ONE


i know you wish you never battled me but its too late faggot
im packing punches and they don’t come in Kool-Aid packets
ya flow is garbage son my rhymes is unconcievable
you beating me is like Drag Queen Nuns in church..Unbelivable
^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE CLOSA GOOD DECENT PUNCHES



OVERALL- THIS IS AN GOOD VERSE U HAD GOOD DECENT PUNCHES AND FLOW....THE PUNCHES TOOK OVER THIS CATERGORY//////


CONCLUSION-YO BOTH OF U HAD GOOD VERSES GOOD PUNCHES AND FLOW BUT I GOTS TO GO WITH THE PERSON WHO HAD HARDEST PUNCHES AND GOOD DECENT ONES> THA HARDEST PUNCHES GOES TO.........PBD

WRECKER YA FLOW WAS MESSED UP AND YA PUNCHES DIDNT COME HARDER THAN PBD SO WORK ON FLOW AND USING GOOD STRUTURE AND USING PERSONALS AND HARDER PUNCHES

PEACE

PntBlnkDistnce 11-29-04 07:57 PM

thnx man keep uppin for votes keep em comin boys ....how long does it take for this to close out???

teknikal vuez 11-29-04 07:58 PM

Voted For: PntBlnkDistnce

Breakdown

Opener: PBD
He Came With A Nice Diss And It Hit Hard.. Wreks was
kinda laid back, and didnt hit hard at all even though
he had good multies..
Closer: PBD
It was Humor Versus Decent On This One. And I went
With the Humor.. I almost Gave This Catagory to Wrek
But he ended his second line terrible..

Highlights For Wrekk:
Wreck Is Gonna GRABBZ-the-TECKK And You'll Be Missing Your Esophogas Like I STABB-your-NECKK<::>

Highlights for PBD:
your a pussy a fake, ill leave you merked-and-soft
only time this faggot 'hits hard' is when hes 'jerkin-off'


Good Job For Both.. But PBD got my vote with better punches and wordplay..

hipnoticz 11-29-04 08:28 PM

Voted For: PntBlnkDistnce

flow-PntBlnkDistnce
punchs-PntBlnkDistnce
struture-PntBlnkDistnce
wordplay-PntBlnkDistnce

damm you smased him nice flow nice wordplay better verse overall i think no beef Wreckk yours was good to but i was feelin his better

mistah_tate 11-29-04 08:30 PM

Voted For: PntBlnkDistnce

aight....aight.....aight

i think pntblnk took this one, for two reasons.

the first reason is, wreckk, your structure was completely fucked up, it was everywhere dawg. that whole "look at my punchline" structure is wack to me man, you dont need all that shit for people to catch on to what you sayin, you had some decent punches but none of them were really aimed at pntblnk, they were just kinda out there

the second reason

pntblnk just out did your verse in my opinion, he just came harder and he didnt have to do all that shit to make people pay attention to his punchlines. the jerkin off line was kinda played but it didnt really matter in this battle, structure was ok, decent punches, you got my vote


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