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Parallel 11-29-04 06:58 PM

Freindly Fire Ft. Indeph & Cenario
 
Stepin back to see a teammate fall, when I dont give a Shit?
I don’t really care if they fall so far down I make them Quit
Startin beef with them temporarily & they always shit Seriously
Then after what I did they end up in the hospital having Surgery
Hopefully he doesn’t come back, I think he thinks hes Reckless
Well he came back, & it ended up that I jacked his Neckless
I didn’t really want this to happen to him but he did it Him-Self
He has problems trying to fight back, Well I said watch Your-Self
Well he said he didn’t care so I took it to him, Was that Wrong?
Must have been, we were a team, we us to be together for so Long
Took awhile for him to finish his elevation but it was his Decision
So he ended up in the hospital got & out weeks later with an Incision
Came up to me felt like he was gonna hit me, but that was a Guess
So I asked him if he would drop the beef, and hoped for an Yes
He said No then it came out that I was right, so he punched Me
I couldn’t do anything but take the hard blow to the face, Directly
Later that day I caught up to him spoke words to him, he said Nothing
He Walked away from me so I punch him he & didn’t do Anything
I giggled because we usto be fam, everyday I would sell a Gram
And he was usually happy because I gave mad deals to such a Man
-2x4…True Story


It was my mistake..but now I gotta change..how..
will I tell my fellow gang..I went to church..and I was saved..
would they accept me..let me in or contest me..
I couldn't continue this life...with all these cops who oppres me..
surprisingly..they stood right by with me..they said
they believed they'd die with me..but that I could leave..
but when I leave somebody gotta die at least..they said..
shoot the nigga on the porch across the street..
I think that's the nigga you hang with in tatered jeans,..
They'd terminate me if I should freeze..so I was on
the brink..My own Life over his..I think my boy was on to me..
I tried to send gestures..to tell him to go inside..
but as he moved his feet..the GD's were notified..they grabed
him clenching his shoulders..said do what I told ya..
and you know wahats gonna happen..if you should fold up..
homie told me..nigga just get the job done...I don't care if he's
your nigga, cousin, mother or father..pull the trigger or risk
getting shotup............................................ ............bang
-Indeph


Fights were always occuring, we would pretend were shamed
And at the same time play these girls like nintendo games
Tempers rose quickly, especially mine do to my background
Friend or foe u knew regardless that i would never back down
The same routine took place, i guess it wore down on us to
Seemed a good day for us was us two hanging out plus two
Exchanged words here and their but nothing of real damage
Gangsta enough with our fist, no need to conceal hammers
Close enough, claimed to be brothers with different mom's
Like suicide attackers are anger came equipped with bombs
Now as of the late few months when u were in this area code
Remember my father's death, u helped me carry my clothes
But shit always wasn't so smooth as our friendship showed
When it came to my ex weren't u the one that got blowed?
But in a way i understood, just repercussions of past sins
I didn't help when u were on the court like chucky atkins
Our relation at times was as stable as cripples on tight ropes
I harbored hate, u attracted girls, i had to search like lycos
Ashamed, ended up on a severe note due to consistant lies
Everyone was beaming at me with extreme persistant eyes
I didn't know at first what the problem was, i soon found out
A comment i made left me alone in other words a man down
It's funny how the littlest things can hit emotions very hard
Seems ya loyalty went under paid like mall security guards
But shit happens, i'm not a wizard, i can't turn back time
So for now our friendship is exposed as more crimes then
-The janet jackson halftime…Cenario


fluidmoon 11-29-04 07:03 PM

wow,this was dope,you guys all had descriptive words, imagery and genuine situations in your verses,they were all strong in there own right, and flowed well together, nice job guys,keep it up, 9/10

Parallel 11-29-04 07:05 PM

im no guy im a girl....weerd...jk...haha...uppin Yall check my other open mics to..

Kawn Flixx 11-29-04 07:39 PM

werd..Fluid's dope...

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you are a girl

Un'Touched 11-29-04 07:43 PM

One Word
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WhACK
haha Just Playin

This Was Dope Homies Keep It Up
This Was Hott You Spit Some Sick Shit In This
Word Im Feelin This All The Way 9/10

Kawn Flixx 11-29-04 09:46 PM

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Parallel 11-29-04 10:42 PM

hehe good feedback keep it up...weerdizzle..

Young Drama 11-29-04 10:46 PM

it was koo, 8.5/10.....................................

i still think 2 by 4 is a bitch but this is about his mc skills, their alright, but as a person hes still a bitch

Parallel 11-29-04 11:25 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Garanteed
it was koo, 8.5/10.....................................

i still think 2 by 4 is a bitch but this is about his mc skills, their alright, but as a person hes still a bitch


thanks you for being honest with my mc skills...and its not my falt..im so dope...:)..i guess it is being online day and night weerd...but i ahte my country...fucken gay..wanna get out of here my freinds are goofs..all they do is piss around like lil bitches...but when i move ill be dropen audios nuts..weerd

Young Drama 11-29-04 11:38 PM

yea, wateva, still a bitch, my open mic shit is wack unless u hear it audio, thats why im doin some songs now

Parallel 11-29-04 11:52 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Garanteed
yea, wateva, still a bitch, my open mic shit is wack unless u hear it audio, thats why im doin some songs now


ya i can see you being dope at audio....but man you need to hear me then...i aint no lil bitch...

DrasticMeasureZ 11-29-04 11:57 PM

hey da next fucking time yall do an callab fuckah'z get at me nuff said.......... :shoot:


o and one word for that piece DOPE

anxiety 11-30-04 12:12 AM

Two By Four- I think you got some serious skill, but put a little bit more work in to your rhymes... Just take five more minutes with the last word of each line and you got a seriously dope piece.

Indeph- Dope as usual, felt the emotion for sure in this one... Nice rhymes and all... Props...

Cenario- Nice shit also, some deep shit, and some humor (end).... Good job to all...

..Cenario.. 11-30-04 12:23 AM

uppin for more feedback in this bitch

..Cenario.. 11-30-04 01:46 AM

uppin for more feedback


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