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Street Ryda Diss
This will be a text-book example of how ta leave a weak MC ripped.. Bitch, Yah last hot delivery stopped when the pizza boy tripped .. Flap yah lips, but how far you think youll go with a whack verse.. "Ryda" been riding dicks so long, he finally got his ass hurt.. Ur a tissue tearer Un extends flames scortchin scalps so now ya aggravated.. Onlookers even regard rippin Kleenex as a win . . kid, that’s fabricated.. If I ever bit one of yah lines. . Id have to hope to Die an choke.. Instead of battles, I recite your lines at amateur night as stand up jokes.. Cut throats? Nah I sever heads like I had you locked in a guillotine.. Ryda juss stays pissed coz hes slept on like hes imbedded in pillow seems.. Did this queen think that hed win? Yah best stick to sucking cocks.. Or do like Emerill when you spit and kick it up a fuckin notch.. 1 look closer cause you Americaz Finest must be mistaken ur Miss America.. Bitch claims his name is Daryl The Pimp Check again his real name is Erica..1 1. His SN is darylthepimp05 so im guessing his name is Daryl i doubt hes talkin about anotha MAN. |
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yo dis was a tigh ass drop but man u opened wit a nice line wit humour and den u came wit that wack ass line bout him gettin ass-fucked dat dented the skill level but u picked da shit up in rest of diss wit nice punches, humour and complex lyrics n structure-------------and stay way from lines bout ppl bein faggots n suckin coks- its just old n looks like ur runnin out of ideas......overall - 8/10 if i was streetryda id be workin hard on a comebak cos u ripped it man. Peace
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This will be a text-book example of how ta leave a weak MC ripped..
Bitch, Yah last hot delivery stopped when the pizza boy tripped .. ^^ eh was alright you coulda made it better and the piza boy thing was wack Flap yah lips, but how far you think youll go with a whack verse.. "Ryda" been riding dicks so long, he finally got his ass hurt.. ^^played punch on me so lame Ur a tissue tearer Un extends flames scortchin scalps so now ya aggravated.. Onlookers even regard rippin Kleenex as a win . . kid, that’s fabricated.. ^^nice but didnt understand why u called me a tissue?... If I ever bit one of yah lines. . Id have to hope to Die an choke.. Instead of battles, I recite your lines at amateur night as stand up jokes.. ^^decent Cut throats? Nah I sever heads like I had you locked in a guillotine.. Ryda juss stays pissed coz hes slept on like hes imbedded in pillow seems.. ^^good Did this queen think that hed win? Yah best stick to sucking cocks.. Or do like Emerill when you spit and kick it up a fuckin notch.. ^^couldve been worded better to have more effect 1 look closer cause you Americaz Finest must be mistaken ur Miss America.. Bitch claims his name is Daryl The Pimp Check again his real name is Erica..1 ^^not that hard of a personal but decent no hate just how i saw it....... peace~1 |
This was nice man, Ur small text's Looks herbish, Not sayin Ur a newb man, Just that structure Newbs use small text so bars actually look lik ethey line up, But sylabble wise they suck. Anyways back 2 ur piece very hot text and all man
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