MC Firetruck vs Damestik
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-29-04 at 08:43 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

DamestiK has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-29-04 08:14 PM.

mc firetruck just look at your name i allready beat u lyrically almost half way insane/
so its your last chance to pray make sure the angels above make sure your ass is ok/
im gonna bust in your house flip out callin me rambo findin your ass in about 2 min about to spray/
dog gay marrage just isnt the way/
look at some ppl on this site there like u there all gay/
wait hold on this could be your last rap could be your fate/
step off this site ill peal you like if u were an orange that was ripe/
your just like another one of eyvon another transvesdike/
another faggot on his bicycle a lil trike/
says im gonna get merked lol yeah right/
thats just like sayin your pussys tight which u know is a lie/
so better change your battery so you can keep goin and goin o u can just plain out die/
askin damestik why oh why/

MC Firetruck has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-29-04 08:25 PM.

I had to set a short drop time for me to be whippin' this pig
Or else he would've run away like Michael Vick in his sig
He's wack but thinks he's the best kid, but I give him credit
He gets felt…when he's molested in his domestics
You only push weight when you walk with ya fat frame
Fuck a punch, I'll make a statement, you give white people a bad name
For real, he claims he's dope 'cuz he listens to Pac all day long
Why you tryin' to "make-up" stories when you got ko'd by Eyvon? (Avon)
So don't ever fuckin' pm me again and try to push me
'Cuz they say you are what you eat, and you admitted to lickin' pussy

This was feedback posted for MC Firetruck
 

Just checkin polls............................................. ......

uppin this ppl were lookin for who rhymed most in there rap!!! :thumbup:

Voted For: MC Firetruck

your word structure was better and you just need to elevate a little bit more/ but the vote goes to u cuz you had better punches and structure.

return da faavor.....http://community.rapverse.com/showb...t=162415....~1~

get tha fuck outta here that wasnt a vote faggot!! :gfy:

someone delete that !!! hes a newb :thumbup: and doesnt know wat the FUCK hes doin :thumbup:

That doesn't determine the outcome of a battle...the fact that I dropped a better verse than you does:thumbup:

Uppin'...

Voted For: MC Firetruck

Aii I Pic This Battle To Vote In Bcuz i thought This Would B A Battle But Damestik Mayne U Werent Comin Hard enough You Lacked Punches And Really U Lacked all The basics Mayne You Couldve done betta Im for sure But You Need To up Ya game Mayne On Da real Im not The best person N Da world but I know How to Help

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Voted For: MC Firetruck

Nice drop U killed it, Uppin this Nice structure! Very nice battle

D, you can get those votes removed if you want, but it'll just waste time since you lost anyways...

Uppin'

Voted For: MC Firetruck

I had to set a short drop time for me to be whippin' this pig
Or else he would've run away like Michael Vick in his sig
decent
He's wack but thinks he's the best kid, but I give him credit
He gets felt…when he's molested in his domestics
okay
You only push weight when you walk with ya fat frame
Fuck a punch, I'll make a statement, you give white people a bad name
okay
For real, he claims he's dope 'cuz he listens to Pac all day long
Why you tryin' to "make-up" stories when you got ko'd by Eyvon? (Avon)
no
So don't ever fuckin' pm me again and try to push me
'Cuz they say you are what you eat, and you admitted to lickin' pussy
decent closer


mc firetruck just look at your name i allready beat u lyrically almost half way insane/
so its your last chance to pray make sure the angels above make sure your ass is ok/
no
im gonna bust in your house flip out callin me rambo findin your ass in about 2 min about to spray/
dog gay marrage just isnt the way/
no
look at some ppl on this site there like u there all gay/
wait hold on this could be your last rap could be your fate/
no
step off this site ill peal you like if u were an orange that was ripe/
your just like another one of eyvon another transvesdike/
no
another faggot on his bicycle a lil trike/
says im gonna get merked lol yeah right/
no
thats just like sayin your pussys tight which u know is a lie/
so better change your battery so you can keep goin and goin o u can just plain out die/
askin damestik why oh why
no

Overall
MC F took this one…
Punches were just harder…
Vocab was decent…flow was good…
Structure was aight…and tha persona’s
Was pretty decent…

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