RED BEAM vs Heavy Artillery
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

3 votes for KO, 5 to win

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-02-04 at 08:24 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Heavy Artillery has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-29-04 08:25 PM.

RED BEAM has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-29-04 08:27 PM.

Yo this kid steps up, not knowing who hes stepping to
this cat lost one already, I'm about to make it 2.
If you think that rappin is the way you better take a detour
I'm ready to blow up on 5, and you wont even C4.
And where Im from the blocks be so hot your feet'll melt
and if we aiming from a distance then you'll be sure to see yourself.
This cat claims to be the best but yo the best is yet to come
this niggas "easy-baked" so come up off the mic your done.
He wants to spit it hard, but wait who ordered his ugly flows
when it comes to battling me you comin up shorter that mugsy bouges.

lyrically abusing MC's, i thought u heard i dont stop
my name rings bells like sunday at 12 o'clock
this is a straight rhyme battle, no personals or beef
red beam rips beats like hoe ripping these streets
suprised my dick aint silver, tha way im fucking these dymes
and u'd think i was a angry cokehead,tha way im "punching-these-lines"
i eat a pound of chicken, cause i love spittin greasy
and i think ur tha one hating cause u cant please me
but im straight, like indian hair, get it right
and u'd think my dick was a floppy disk, tha way u "saving- these-bytes"
i roll right, you roll left, or somewhere outta my sight
one hit, knocking out ya lights, nigga saying good night

aight..i guess...off da top...vote honest or dont vote, and if u dont understand something, dont vote....and remember i return all votes...

lol...tha hottest thing u said was that mugsy bouges line, and i was scared i was gunna lose, cause i dropped a wack verse...this gotta be a easy win for me...lol...no hate tho

Voted For: Heavy Artillery

this battle was weak, ya'll gotta come with harder punches that makes people got woooo, not just regular shit like this. Red Beam you had a nice flow, but most of your shit was just filler man, just kept talking about yourself, in a battle you gotta make your opponent look weak. neither yall impressed me but heavy came a little better withat that c4 line that somewhat made sense.

that c4 line was weak...but w/e,,,u weak too kid^

Voted For: Heavy Artillery

I'll have to give this one to Heavy cause he spit harder on the punchlines and personals, RED had a good flow but it just couldn't top Heavy's. Scoreboard:
Punches:heavy
Personals:heavy
Multis:RED
opener:Heavy
Closer:Heavy
overall:Heavy:7/10
overall:RED:5/10

honest vote no hate. one
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Voted For: RED BEAM

aiight heavy i liked your verse but it was too basic... red beam was a little more complex decent punches and the wordplay was pretty sick and im a fan of wordplay plus he had better metaphors and the closer had alot of flow so red beam gets my vote dope battle tho

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Voted For: RED BEAM

iight nice drops, but i wasnt feelin Heavy, u didnt make me feel wat u was tryin to feel, unlike RED, nice drop, lines were kinda stretched but i felt ur verse. If Heavy came wit sum personals and harder punches, then he would've got my vote...BUT RED got min eon this 1
Keep elevating Heavy

Voted For: Heavy Artillery

Lol. Liked this verse better. Seemed more personal, and the mugsy bouges line......shiiiiiiiiiiiiit man, tight as hell.

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Voted For: Heavy Artillery

ite heavy artillery took this because red beam werent even dissing him basically. For instants his opener..he was praising himself rather than landing a punch. Dude dont you know that the 1st is the most important lol. Other than that their structure was pretty even and at least heavy attempted wordplay lol.

Voted For: Heavy Artillery

ehh this was an ok battle but u guys all used lines ive heard b4.....u came up with harder punches and ur flow wwas a little better i think both of u could have done betetr i think this battle was weak but u had betetr punches so i gave it to u
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