PntBlnkDistnce vs terror2005
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-29-04 at 09:16 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

PntBlnkDistnce has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-29-04 08:47 PM.

Terror2005 has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-29-04 09:05 PM.

See? I'm about to take this cat out in an instance,
leave him picking up his own nuts from "pntblnkdistance,"
Give ya a better job, you need ya own grave to dig,
While the only vote your gonna get is already in ya sig,
You battling me, you gonna leave in serious "terror,
It seems it wont take much to leave ya with a brain error,
Nobody's heard of ya, so take ya weak shit back,
It's a shame even on ya open mics ya had to beg for feedback,
I would sit through ya verse, but it just bores me,
this is the end ya "od'd and lived, but ya life was a "Short story"

here is the link to his short story he made called "od'd and lived" http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162162

this terror-is-shit i'll grapple-ya-throat, tackle-ya-hopes
only time you punch-lines is when youre mad-at-ya-coke
Hold yah eyes terror Yah pupils bout to-be-popped-out
Makin you the new Kanye RV wonderin why-you-dropped-out
Lurkin-with-grace heres some patches' hopin i-dont-gore-you
guess I win cause if youre unknown nobodys gonna vote-for-you
youre tuckin-your-cock entrust-youll-fucken-get-shot
and put in medical-arrest like a nurse fuckin-a-cop
im evil-with-clips while your whole demeanor-is-bitch
cut ya nuts off that way youll have an un-beat-able-dick

uppin this bitch..........................................

Voted For: PntBlnkDistnce

v/ pntblnk
damn good battle first off...
both of you had real good punches, but pntblnks were jus better, had me laughin the whole way through, i can only image what it would be like i were watchin this battle in the streets or somethin...
both had good structure, like i said good punches, but another thing pntblnk had over terror was multis, this doesnt really help out in a battle (in my opinion) but when its a close one everything counts...
you both had nice flow as well, its jus punches win in a battle and pnt blnks were better...

Voted For: PntBlnkDistnce

Ey Point blank ripped this nigga everyone 'll agree wit me so I won't even explain why

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thnx guys uppin this bitch for votes........................

Voted For: PntBlnkDistnce

yo pnt got this... punches terror throw punches!!! pnt ya shyt was new, dope, strait flow, good wordplay, multi's was on point, nice structure... nice verse
terror i felt ya verse but ur punches werent too personal and dint hit as hard as his did... other than that nice verse

v/pntblnkdistnce
~1~

Voted For: PntBlnkDistnce

damn, this was a good battle in my opinion

terror came wit some good personals, i liked the last line, that was hot. your verse started off slow and picked up towards the end, decent punches, nice personals overall good verse. after reading yours i was wondering if pntblnk could take it

pntblnk got my vote mainly because of the punchlines, you started off crazy, kinda fell off in the middle, but picked it up at the end. you was talkin about his genitals a lil too much, but made up for it with wordplay, just chill out talkin about peoples dicks....lol

yall both dropped hard, pntblnk just dropped harder imo

Voted For: PntBlnkDistnce

V/PntBlnkDistnce.... he came wit harder punchs an vocab an creativity was on point......Terror.. u had a good opener but u didnt have that consistent flow or that much vocab.....V/PntBlnkDistnce

uppin for more votes....................................

Voted For: PntBlnkDistnce

PntBlnkDistnce

this terror-is-shit i'll grapple-ya-throat, tackle-ya-hopes
only time you punch-lines is when youre mad-at-ya-coke
^hot opener!
Hold yah eyes terror Yah pupils bout to-be-popped-out
Makin you the new Kanye RV wonderin why-you-dropped-out
^nice one...
Lurkin-with-grace heres some patches' hopin i-dont-gore-you
guess I win cause if youre unknown nobodys gonna vote-for-you
^hmmm, decent but couldve been better
youre tuckin-your-cock entrust-youll-fucken-get-shot
and put in medical-arrest like a nurse fuckin-a-cop
^ok line but again, couldve been better
im evil-with-clips while your whole demeanor-is-bitch
cut ya nuts off that way youll have an un-beat-able-dick
^nice closer
Good drop although you fell off a little near the ending, flow was nice, vocab and wordplay were good...maybe could've had some more hardhitting stuff but overall good one!

Terror2005

See? I'm about to take this cat out in an instance,
leave him picking up his own nuts from "pntblnkdistance
^weak opener...
Give ya a better job, you need ya own grave to dig,
While the only vote your gonna get is already in ya sig,
^nah, doesnt make much sense...
You battling me, you gonna leave in serious "terror,
It seems it wont take much to leave ya with a brain error
^played...but okay i guess...
Nobody's heard of ya, so take ya weak shit back,
It's a shame even on ya open mics ya had to beg for feedback,
^blablabla, heard it all before...
I would sit through ya verse, but it just bores me,
this is the end ya "od'd and lived, but ya life was a "Short story"
^good closer
Flow and vocab was pretty good but you need more hardhitting punches and personals, this shit was mad played! Just get a little more creative