S.T.A.R. -Vs- Sunshine
 

Ok.!0-15 bars. Do beef votes. Must be explained but not to long.

weak mixed rap get bagged in sacks like colubian made crack//
overdosed newbies wanna be lyrical groupies but they stay wack//
beating me you must be wishin, you get cooked like crack in the kitchen//
edgar allen poe even missin', ya shook singin annabelle lee hook whie washin dishes//
foe of fame and attention so listen, study my lyrical mission KID in after school dtention//
and congratulations to those never hatin', spit rugged 4x4 rhymes easier then multiplication//
sent away for dealin and stealin a playstation, jail time fa killin but i needed it fa vacation//
got out hot on the block like a gigantic candle, call my rhymes MVP like a Iverson handle//
no mind the weather cause i never get dismantled from bullets swung like mickey mantle//
hey SUNSHINE, heres my dime: you must be wack if i beat you with no punchlines.!!!

5 votes u win 3 and 0 is a knock out

ok hurry up and spit ok

Star knows the sunshine from a mile away// and my desert dont just spit that eagle sprays// the eclipse from the clips blinds star when the bullet drags// im choppin star like blades and puttin him in body bags// the nuts sag thats the sign of a man// blunt in my left and glock in my right hand//i ripped u with 5 simple bars man//Damn! why u waste my time spittin shit like nursery rhymes//if u wanna be in dark intent come harder than that// cuz that shit u just spit was straight up wack

1st of all FUCK YOU and dark intent

you call that shit a rap. ha. you got na style., no inners, multies, no word play,.


that shit was elementry
rhyming with bag- sag ......man hand

damn my 7 year old brother got more flow then you

if DARK INTENT GOT WEAK AS Fags like you in it im glad i didnt join

yo i was feedin off your bll shit how bout u reall ryme then bitch

stars so fuckin gay hes gonna come at me with a gay ass verse and expect me to spit hard.........dumb ass

aight check it
 

sunshine........your verse was aight but did'nt have enough punches and multies....it lacked a battle verse

but STAR had aight punches weak but enought to beat
sunshine
VOTE:STAR

Star Took Dis........

His punches were jus more harder......
Sunshine...maybe you shoulda came harder.....cuz ur bein coky lost u da match in my opinion.......
Ur verse lacked hard hittin punches............
Ya flow was iight....but punches weren't there

In my opinion....Ya both shoulda took dis more seriously....
cuz ya both have good potential to battle.....
So please let's see da rematch....uz dis is pretty much over wit.....THis'll make it 2-0......Someone else will prolly vote for star cuz he really did come nicer........
But ya both should do da rematch and come at ya best levelz.......and star that shit u were doin...swayin...was herbish....no need to sway votez....especially whe it's obvious u won....Insecure or sumthin..??

so y'all should hit up da remtach

My Vote=S.T.A.R

peace.....

can y'all peep my battle wit Kaotik and drop a vote for who you think won dat match......

both of them shits were kinda weak, not very many punches thrown at all but overall the best punches came from stars, both gots some tight potential cuz y'a'll had a nice flow just this is a battle my vote goes to

vote=S.T.A.R. and I wanna battle you now, check bitch slapped

nevermind S.T.A.R. Check the LLBL and check in and spit, we got a 3 way match wit each other, hurry up and post, so I can rip you

S.T.A.R.

- got out hot on the block like a gigantic candle, call my rhymes MVP like a Iverson handle//

Decent word play.

- hey SUNSHINE, heres my dime: you must be wack if i beat you with no punchlines.!!!

Made me laugh.

sunshine

- and my desert dont just spit that eagle sprays//
- the eclipse from the clips blinds star when the bullet drags//

Nice use of his name in battle.

I wasn't feeling this battle too much. Maybe cause it was short? But, I was definitely feeling STAR more than sunshine. STAR brought a better flow to the table.

i wasnt feelin this battle at all

I hope you weren't cuz this battle was whack...I got bored reading first lines of both ya'lls verses...but I'll vote anyways... S.T.A.R. took this one from actually throwing punches...Sunshine you preferred to talk about being better than him...words talk, but actions speak better than words...Both flow patterns could use tweeking they tended to be uneven, and run on at points.

VOTE= S.T.A.R. all constructive criticism, jus the fact that as soon as battles were down ya'll started beefing for votes like a Jay-Z and Nas battle, all show for publicity....sad really, next time let ya rhymes speak for themselves

well this one is closed i guess like 5-0 ko. whe will rematch again sometime. thx for the postive remarks..thx for the battle sunshine NO BEEF. i aint got time for it.