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DQ 11-30-04 12:57 PM

hipnoticz vs Drama Queen
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-03-04 at 12:57 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 11-30-04 12:59 PM

Drama Queen has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-30-04 12:59 PM.

System 11-30-04 01:19 PM

hipnoticz has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-30-04 01:19 PM.

DQ 11-30-04 02:05 PM

Run away while you can cause i'll leave you Ripped Into Pieces (RIP)
When you drop your lines, the level on the nerd-o-meter increases
I'll smack you around like Serena did on the Holy Grass*
Identity see through like glass, apathic sheep following the mass
Man, i'd even join Al-Quaeda to drop a bomb on the UK
Just so i can stop you from dropping this wack old shit all day
You're no shrink so stop claminig that your rhymes are hypnotic
Dealing with my verse, so psychotic, makes things get chaotic
"Weak emcee murdered by a Killer B" is what you'll see on the BBC
Sorry Oh Mighty England but he simply wasn't my cup of tea


*lives in London: Wimbledon
Played the whole UK-thing if you didn't notice it

hipnoticz 11-30-04 02:15 PM

when lifted i burn barz inflit battle scars
never play fare ahm like a daddy-day-care
ahm runnin you raggid
you can diss me on tha votes cuz mah lines them jaggid
u say ur good but ur exagerating again they dont call u drama quenn 4 nuttin
this bicth sent me like 3 pms like "will you battle me"actin like ahm fronttin
i dont give fuck if she he wonna test me or even beat me
ahm servin those bars up like a chinese cook
"may i take you oder plz" ye can i have a 1-2-3 three vote victorey
mah battle stats them hungerey
ahm like a gagit on ya shelf not to be played wit
ya vocad smaller than a migit now thas sayin shit

DQ 12-01-04 10:53 AM

Uppin this shit...return the favor people and don't sleep!

DQ

Artik Phrost 12-01-04 11:52 AM

Voted For: Drama Queen

v/DRAME QUEEN
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Quote:
Run away while you can cause i'll leave you Ripped Into Pieces (RIP)
When you drop your lines, the level on the nerd-o-meter increases
I'll smack you around like Serena did on the Holy Grass*
Identity see through like glass, apathic sheep following the mass
Man, i'd even join Al-Quaeda to drop a bomb on the UK
Just so i can stop you from dropping this wack old shit all day
You're no shrink so stop claminig that your rhymes are hypnotic
Dealing with my verse, so psychotic, makes things get chaotic
"Weak emcee murdered by a Killer B" is what you'll see on the BBC
Sorry Oh Mighty England but he simply wasn't my cup of tea

....a lil on tha elementary side, but you were consistent with the punches...the flowing..and wordplays..."I'd even Join AL-Quaeda"....wow...bold one, gurl...eh i'll give it a 7/10...keep battling and readin battles of iLL heads...

Quote:
when lifted i burn barz inflit battle scars
never play fare ahm like a daddy-day-care
ahm runnin you raggid
you can diss me on tha votes cuz mah lines them jaggid
u say ur good but ur exagerating again they dont call u drama quenn 4 nuttin
this bicth sent me like 3 pms like "will you battle me"actin like ahm fronttin
i dont give fuck if she he wonna test me or even beat me
ahm servin those bars up like a chinese cook
"may i take you oder plz" ye can i have a 1-2-3 three vote victorey
mah battle stats them hungerey
ahm like a gagit on ya shelf not to be played wit
ya vocad smaller than a migit now thas sayin shit

...elementary...some of it didn't rhyme..or make sense(fourth line)...the flow was choppy....but, you did have some personals in there...i lyked that...but, you need to elevate seriously and keep battling...i'll give it a 5/10....

theres my break down...take it or leave it

hipnoticz 12-01-04 12:00 PM

wtf you bunch of fuckin dickryders do you know wordplay is an mulitys she didnt have any i did fuck you dick battle me then if you think i need elevate i won this an shes knows it

DQ 12-01-04 12:09 PM

Thanks for the vote and no one's dickriding btw because i don't even know Artik Phrost so chill...It's just one vote, don't get worked up about it.....people take things so serious....

Artik Phrost 12-01-04 12:14 PM

^^fuck you dawg....i was just being honest....she was better...i dont even know tha chick...HOW AM I DICKRYDING....you wasnt rhyming in half yo verse...SCARS-CARE:NO!
ME-COOK:NO!....learn how to rhyme before you bitch, dawg...THATS PROLLY WHY MUHFUCKAHS DONT VOTE....HERBS LYKE YOU DONT KNOW HOW TO HANDLE CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM....fuck off

Willa 12-01-04 03:10 PM

Voted For: Drama Queen

structure- u had better structure by far hips was all unever he needs to work on that
fl;ow tie both had good flow his might have been a bit better due to his simplicity lol
punches u u had decent punches and personals he kinda glorified himself a bit
so overall u u came harder better all around props girl
u both could improve a bit but straight battle

DQ 12-01-04 03:16 PM

Thanks for the votes people, favors will be returned honestly...

SixX da FinisH 12-01-04 06:45 PM

Voted For: Drama Queen

o shyyyytttttttt!!!!! she killed him!!!!!!
flow was so tight, the punches were on target... had personals... had a multi in there.... funny as shyt

"Weak emcee murdered by a Killer B" is what you'll see on the BBC
Sorry Oh Mighty England but he simply wasn't my cup of tea

^^ had ma laughin yo shyt was so tight...

v/Drama Queen
~1~

Ghost_Emperor 12-02-04 10:33 AM

Voted For: Drama Queen

Drama Queen got this one... her punches were way more creative and her flow was iite. Hypnoticz: your drop seemed pretty simple and played, you made no real attempt at punches or multis or anything. i like your personals but ya gotta step your game up man. I was really feeling Drama Queen's personals tho... haha, that BBC/cup of tea bar had me cracking. Yo nice battle, hit me up with an honest vote to return the favour if u can!

DQ 12-02-04 11:19 AM

Thanks for all the votes and they will be honestly returned by the way...

DQ


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