2004.....jus' a form of slavery organized!
 

How can I blame a palefaced being
for what my people did to me first?
Black Kings and queens invented the slave trade,
it's just that palefaces did it worst
They observed and marvelled at our greatness
And chose to displace it
Brought us to this land and invented the word racist
Conquered our minds by division,
taught us to see a difference and hate it
Then curse us for the ignorance that they created
Damn i'm so glad that we made it,
but then again did we really
you may not agree now but trust,
you will eventually feel me
back in the days the masters tools were
whips and chains
analyze the game now a days and you'll see
his tools ain't changed
you still do what he wants of you
just in a different day and age
just different words in a book
but same chapter and same page

feedbak wanted..................................

damn... nobody commented on this?... that's fucked up.... no one wants to hear real shyt... but i bet if the title was 2004, My Guns Still Bust... there woulda been a shytload of feedback... this shyt was tight and it was kinda like the joint in my sig verses Anxiety... peep it... it's already closed so ya can't vote or leave feedback... omma repost it in the OM thread... but yeah... this was realy good shyt and i enjoy reading shyt with a legitimate message... stay up

Not too bad. Good topic to write to, and you dished up the emotion pretty decently. Wording could use a little work, weak vocab but it worked fine. All in all it was ok. Keep writin

yeah seems peeps don't wanna think about reality but to each his own.i'm just glad somebody read it and left some feed,which is greatly appreciated.