|
BostonLyricist vs Black Thief
Battle Rules:
12-16 lines all fire Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 12-03-04 at 05:20 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
BostonLyricist has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-30-04 05:23 PM.
|
havent battled in a while....so consider this the rebirth
yeah bostons back............. lyrical murder is to easy living is more pain... and i'll give you twice as much then when jesus was slain.. through this battle you have nothing to gain... like a dry lake recieving one drop of rain... my mentals are beyond comparison your simply out matched... i hit hard like your body to the earth sky diving without a shute attached.. i'll have your concious warning you not to compete... have your face in the crevices of my tims between concrete... my sole purpose is to execute and full-fill... call me demolishon man i succeed when your name says murder-dealth-kill... snatch ya eye out for grillin my flow like uma did black mamba on kill bill... your a faggot times two like real world in philly... i posess the ability to shave ya neck like the purples mrs seally... since you a thief i got somethin for you to steal... a nut from my dick to your mouth so you can taste me cummin for real... why kill you i want you to live with the nightmares of the lyricist torture tactics... and when you die burry this as an audio in ya casket... so where ever you go up or down your loss will be in audio bastard..... i think it was alright.....could had a little more punch....it had meaning though....yeah it did...what you think world...you know what i give ah fuck what the world thinks...hollah |
Black Thief has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-30-04 09:57 PM.
|
** steps to the ring...polishes boots**"ahem"/
You dont reall want it fam, my punchlines is flawless/ Leave you jawless Im lawless...put a Piston to ya face and I aint talkin bout Wallace/ Extinguish your most fire lyrics with ease..my flow is flame retardant/ relinquish your most tired gimmicks kid...your style?simply retarded/ and you can get ya skull cracked like the Liberty Bell/ You cant beat me so join me...Ill see you in hell/ Verbally assault you...beat you down to a bloody pulp/ and mix you wit Henny and drink ya like Incredible Hulk/ Boston knows he really is fearin this/ cause just you aint feelin this dont make u a tru lyricist/ You the only cat on the site that stay typin bout sumthin/ buut when it comes to spittiin...you stay rappin bout nuthin/ try to spark back...watch me laugh at ya feeble attempts/ and if give u a quick glimpse of how ya the best of your efforts can be easily eclipsed/ by simple words from my lips...that is... |
Voted For: Black Thief
ok heres the breakdown: blackthief: your verse was pretty good... decent multies good wordplay.. a nameplay that was decent.. punches were dope meta's were hot especially the opener.. ill put a piston to ya face but i aint talking bout wallace that was dope and the best bar of the battle.. gotta work on ya structure tho even the lines up overall : 7.8/10 BL: you had a decent verse the first 4 lines were extremely wack and werent directed at black thief they were like an open mic drop... nothing was against him.. you had better flow than black thief but you lacked in every other area... focus on punches and personals more... you had some decent wordplay but your structure needs work also so try fixing that up overall : 4.9/10 vote: black thief return the favor on any battle in my sig plz |
^^^UPPIN'!!!!!!!!^^^
good job fellas......y'all handled business. bravo...bra-vo. what up thief? you did the damn thing playboy. nice work. its cool to see you still taking care of business. keep on keeping on brotha. hollar at ya muthafuckin' boy...SUPERVILLAIN209@aol.com. oner. s.v. the kingpin |
Voted For: Black Thief
Wow, This Is What Happens When You Leave Site For An Extended Period Of Time... You're Left Spitting With An Outdated Style... Punches: Black Wordplay: Black Flow: Black Structure: Niether Overall Enjoyment: Black You Both REALLY Need Some Practise Though... .One. |
uppin this battle bitches
|
uppin for votes...........
|
upppin this shit for votes.....will sell crack for honest votes
|
Voted For: Black Thief
lyrical murder is to easy living is more pain... and i'll give you twice as much then when jesus was slain.. BLAH MADD PLAYED PUNCH through this battle you have nothing to gain... like a dry lake recieving one drop of rain... META WAS WACK AS FUCK NO REAL CREATIVITY AT ALL my mentals are beyond comparison your simply out matched... i hit hard like your body to the earth sky diving without a shute attached.. SELF GLORY NONO THATS NEVER GOOD i'll have your concious warning you not to compete... have your face in the crevices of my tims between concrete... NOTHING NO PUNCH JUST TALKING SHIT my sole purpose is to execute and full-fill... call me demolishon man i succeed when your name says murder-dealth-kill... DECENT PERSONAL STRECHED AS FUCKKKKK snatch ya eye out for grillin my flow like uma did black mamba on kill bill... your a faggot times two like real world in philly... AINT FLOW AT ALL PUNCH WAS LAME i posess the ability to shave ya neck like the purples mrs seally... since you a thief i got somethin for you to steal... OK NOTHING AT ALL a nut from my dick to your mouth so you can taste me cummin for real... why kill you i want you to live with the nightmares of the lyricist torture tactics... JUST SHIT TALKING and when you die burry this as an audio in ya casket... so where ever you go up or down your loss will be in audio bastard..... THIS WAS A WACK ENDER TOO OK BOSTON SHIT WAS STRECHED NO PUNCHES PLAYED CONCEPTS THIS WAS WACK AS FUCK YOU FELL OFF BIG TIME:( You dont reall want it fam, my punchlines is flawless/ Leave you jawless Im lawless...put a Piston to ya face and I aint talkin bout Wallace/ GOOD PUNCH 1ST LINE WAS WACK DONT SELF GLORY YOURSELF Extinguish your most fire lyrics with ease..my flow is flame retardant/ relinquish your most tired gimmicks kid...your style?simply retarded/ GOOD WORD PLAY HERE AND NICE MULTIS and you can get ya skull cracked like the Liberty Bell/ You cant beat me so join me...Ill see you in hell/ WACK Verbally assault you...beat you down to a bloody pulp/ and mix you wit Henny and drink ya like Incredible Hulk/ WHY WOULD YOU WANNA DRINK HIM?NO Boston knows he really is fearin this/ cause just you aint feelin this dont make u a tru lyricist/ WACK You the only cat on the site that stay typin bout sumthin/ buut when it comes to spittiin...you stay rappin bout nuthin/ NO PUNCH try to spark back...watch me laugh at ya feeble attempts/ and if give u a quick glimpse of how ya the best of your efforts can be easily eclipsed/ by simple words from my lips...that is... GOOD CLOSER BUT STRECHED AS FUCK OK YOU HAD OK PUNCHES AND GOOD CREATIVITY GOT YOU THIS YOUR SHIT WAS MORE CREATIVE BY FAR I MEAN FUCKING BOSTON USED GAY JOKES ?!!THAT SHIT IS HELLA PLAYED.ANYWAYS THATS WHY YOU WON WORK ON BETTER PUNCHES AND STRUCTURE:) AND BOTH RETURN A HONEST VOTE |
uppin for votes......
|
Voted For: Black Thief
BostonLyricist: lyrical murder is to easy living is more pain... and i'll give you twice as much then when jesus was slain.. Blah, weak opener through this battle you have nothing to gain... like a dry lake recieving one drop of rain... Decet meta, no real punch my mentals are beyond comparison your simply out matched... i hit hard like your body to the earth sky diving without a shute attached.. Weak... i'll have your concious warning you not to compete... have your face in the crevices of my tims between concrete... No real punch here my sole purpose is to execute and full-fill... call me demolishon man i succeed when your name says murder-dealth-kill... snatch ya eye out for grillin my flow like uma did black mamba on kill bill... Weak, and it wasn't Black Mamba... your a faggot times two like real world in philly... i posess the ability to shave ya neck like the purples mrs seally... More weakness since you a thief i got somethin for you to steal... a nut from my dick to your mouth so you can taste me cummin for real... Blah, played... why kill you i want you to live with the nightmares of the lyricist torture tactics... and when you die burry this as an audio in ya casket... so where ever you go up or down your loss will be in audio bastard Weak closer Black Thief: You dont reall want it fam, my punchlines is flawless/ Leave you jawless Im lawless...put a Piston to ya face and I aint talkin bout Wallace/ Decent multis here, a little stretched, no real punch Extinguish your most fire lyrics with ease..my flow is flame retardant/ relinquish your most tired gimmicks kid...your style?simply retarded/ Weak... and you can get ya skull cracked like the Liberty Bell/ You cant beat me so join me...Ill see you in hell/ No real punch here Verbally assault you...beat you down to a bloody pulp/ and mix you wit Henny and drink ya like Incredible Hulk/ Weak... Boston knows he really is fearin this/ cause just you aint feelin this dont make u a tru lyricist/ Weak attempt at a personal You the only cat on the site that stay typin bout sumthin/ buut when it comes to spittiin...you stay rappin bout nuthin/ Weak... try to spark back...watch me laugh at ya feeble attempts/ and if give u a quick glimpse of how ya the best of your efforts can be easily eclipsed/ by simple words from my lips...that is... Weak closer... Winner: Black Thief, although this battle was wack. No hate to either of you, just elevate y'all... Return the favor to a link in my sig, honest explained votes only... |
Voted For: Black Thief
-Black Thief- Your verse was good... your sctures wasnt the best at all you had one really stretched line... your verse wasnt anywhere near evened out.... your flow was good although the lines being stretched kinda wears the flow out.... the pucnhes was good though some hit harder then other but i wouls say it was pretty much even with you consistancy with the punches... -Boston- Your struture wasnt good either but it was more evened out and had kinda a patteren to it but yeah it was better then his so thats all that matters... your flow was okay aswell but with the lines being long then short like that throws off the flow.... punches was good but you just wasnt as consistant as Black was |
| All times are GMT -4. The time now is 04:19 AM. |