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Rambo 11-30-04 09:07 PM

T-Wrecks vs Rambo
 
Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-30-04 at 11:07 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

System 11-30-04 09:08 PM

Rambo has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-30-04 09:08 PM.

Rambo 11-30-04 09:18 PM

Rambo runs threw little motherfuckers like this fruity nigga/
Bend over get that motherfuckin tech in ya botty nigga//
Tha T in ya name stand for Transvestite/
So much pain in ya brain you get no rest at nite//
Test me and you gon meet my best friend/
And then his good friends leave marks in ya dirty rear end//
Im accepted cause im known like tha nigga wit a crome/
Blast 3 fuckin bullets leave holes in ya fuckin dome//
I swear you lucky cause you luck like doe/
But tha words that you say suck like hoe//

System 11-30-04 09:31 PM

T-Wrecks has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-30-04 09:31 PM.

T-Wrecks 11-30-04 09:55 PM

Czech it...

Just forget ur rap aspirations, kid u're just moving forward to get hit
Cause my ill rhymes inflict on kids, I'm known to be leavin' ya sick
Holy shit! Ram just be bringin' those rhymes that we all love to hate
And if I want to catch wack flowin' in water, this guy's the bait
U actually set this shit up? Now kid, I coulda told u that was a mistake
Ram's been headin' down dead-end road all his life w/out the brakes
This site has lost all respect for you, and all of your lyrics are off
Wanna Monitor Types of Text? Please, your presence is Microsoft
Royce wanted to Roll with the big boys, but he forgot his liscense
And RV ain't seen a bigger disaster since the Cuban Missle Crisis!
Later

FlowIntelligent. 11-30-04 09:58 PM

Voted For: T-Wrecks

v/ t-wrecks no explanation needed lol


but so this dont get deleted ill say this.. rambo your first bar was gay as fuck lmao it was funny tho but gay.. twrecks u started out wack but got dope when the verse moved on good shit... good structure and wordplay and once again good metaphors... rambo your rhymes are still too basic elevate some more... use harder punches and better structure and forget the slashes //// at the ends of yuor bars it looks gay

T-Wrecks 12-01-04 08:52 AM

Uppin this... vote, peeps. Now! It's time for me to win. :)

PntBlnkDistnce 12-01-04 09:01 AM

Voted For: T-Wrecks

nice battle man u came out in this one by fr rambos rhymes were soooo simple and deff not played out cuz nobody would even think of usin them wack but u had some aight punches and flow was deff better along with ryhmes nice drop man keep uppin for votes

vote in my battles
under my sig

teknikal vuez 12-01-04 09:08 AM

Voted For: T-Wrecks

<<< BREAKDOWN >>>

RAMBO:


Rambo runs threw little motherfuckers like this fruity nigga/
Bend over get that motherfuckin tech in ya botty nigga//
WTF, Are you Serious LMAO
Tha T in ya name stand for Transvestite/
So much pain in ya brain you get no rest at nite//
LMAO.. ok that was just... well.... bad..
Test me and you gon meet my best friend/
And then his good friends leave marks in ya dirty rear end//
WTF, Battle the Hype Is Real
Im accepted cause im known like tha nigga wit a crome/
Blast 3 fuckin bullets leave holes in ya fuckin dome//
gun talk is not cool anymore, that line was terrible..
I swear you lucky cause you luck like doe/
But tha words that you say suck like hoe//
wow that was terrible

um well, i usually critique people here but.. um well.. just go battle the hype is real

T-Wrecks:
Just forget ur rap aspirations, kid u're just moving forward to get hit
Cause my ill rhymes inflict on kids, I'm known to be leavin' ya sick
Holy shit! Ram just be bringin' those rhymes that we all love to hate
And if I want to catch wack flowin' in water, this guy's the bait
ok good straight disses, no good punch.. but good multies and disses..
U actually set this shit up? Now kid, I coulda told u that was a mistake
Ram's been headin' down dead-end road all his life w/out the brakes"
another good diss, gj
This site has lost all respect for you, and all of your lyrics are off
Wanna Monitor Types of Text? Please, your presence is Microsoft
Royce wanted to Roll with the big boys, but he forgot his liscense
And RV ain't seen a bigger disaster since the Cuban Missle Crisis!
its over


k, you just murderd this battle... on the real.. you had better disses, and punches.. were as rambo did not have any good disses or punches.. this battle was lopsided from the start.. good job twrecks..


VOTE ON MY BATTLE VERSUS 4FIL.. HIT THE SIG !!!!!

T-Wrecks 12-03-04 02:55 PM

Uppin. Vote like ya mama showed ya.

warrior 12-03-04 03:12 PM

Voted For: T-Wrecks

aight this battle wasnt that good but T-wrecks deffinently took this without a doubt his punches were hittin harder and he had a lil bit of good wordplay so my vote goes to T-wrecks ram ya shit was not to good but it was alright.

PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOR:
please drop a honost vote on my battle with blanko its a pretty good battle and its tied 4-4 so we only need one more vote and its been up for a month so please drop an honost vote and end it thnx

Lil Nae2 12-03-04 03:58 PM

Voted For: T-Wrecks

man dude won hands down both need to elevate but T how betta puches and da shit was funny in a way pick up on yo vocab but creativity was nice man keep up da good work


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