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the death of hip hop
Hip hop is an art form, that started years ago.. as a way of expression when there was no tears to blow.. street cyphers and dj's, stickin 8 tracks on replay.. just so you could recite your favorite lrycis eve-ree-day.. we used to dance on boxes, harlem steps was a stage.. hip hop matured with age, and kept me out of the cage.. and with all the rage, i spit out my whole life story.. comin off iller than the man who spit before me.. but than we started battlin, makin fun of eachother.. spit disses out to every-one and their mothers.. than the shit got crazy, violence was trendy.. battled the wrong dude, he fired back with where he'd like to send me.. according to him i was doomed to 6 feet under.. than it started rainin lead, with lightning and thunder.. I made it out alive...but my fear is strong.. that my death will ultimately be the result of a song.. as time moved on, i started to realize some shit.. hip hop was dyin..and it was takin me with it.. see the problem today is, not that we're uncreative.. but yall can't take a joke so it's dangerous to say shit.. gangster is played, and if you keep bustin those caps.. you'll destroy every artist untill theres no more left to rap.. |
Well Spoken cuz yo message was clear. Transitions are smooth
Contend i could relate to...Hiphop is Life... well done |
uppoin for the people
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uppin again for you folks......
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its true what ur speaking fam...........nice flow..........good concepts.........good creativity..............emotion............i give dis an 9/10 upp that vocab
but everything else...........shit is dope leave an feedbck in my om "freestyle#2" chea |
thanks for the feedback....but a high vocab isn't always effective...check my other pieces if you want vocab
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ok even though your my bitch that was good i can probally sell you for mre now:)dope shit good visuale dope topic and true i been in mad fights over rap especially in jail so thats real dope shit good topic i got something similar on audio way back
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yeah I agree wit empire!! :thumbup:
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uppin..it really needs to be read
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this was coo......good topic...man......u got any more shit on here?
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hip hop well never die no matter the fuck what! but ill give ya 6/10
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ill lyrix, tru feelin......~1~, gud structure an rymin words...woz easi to read
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i hate you ^^..
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i'm sorry you hate me...linguistics..i have a lot of shit on here
and x-cell...hip hop might not never die...it's a story..with a message..the message is if we keep killin eachother...there will be no one left to rap |
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^^^damn you vish.........you stole my response homie, lol. nice drop crhymie. i felt the emotion in this piece........it was tight.....as usual. you came at it like a dedicated hip hopper flooded with frustration......which inevitably transcends into a bleek and gloomy outlook on the future of the game that we know and love. i feel where your coming from, its crazy how much things have changed in the last decade, word. keep up the good shit mayne.......one love. ^^^UPPIN' FOR BIG VISH!!! ...the super... |
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