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Willa 12-01-04 02:29 AM

my new song
 
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/ggggunitmusic.htm
fludimooons gonan be on it and any other femcees that interested
i still have alot of work to od but its alot of improvement from the crew collab lol :thumbup:

Phenom-in-all 12-01-04 02:47 AM

Nice drop. Flow needs more emotion, and to be blended a lil better with the beat, but you got some potential ma. Good to see the ladies finally spitting. Good looks to Willa and Fluid. There's been a gap ever since LK went MIA.

Willa 12-01-04 02:50 AM

thanks phenom i appreciate it
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162657
i left feedback on this and im gonna hit up a few more

Key... 12-01-04 02:54 AM

Umm Flow...was aite...I couldnt make out what u sayin yo vocals were too down...turn it up...

I heard when u said " A superwomen fuck Christopher Reeves"

Beat is nice....am feelin it

Could be longer try to work on emotions u will get there spit more often....verse was 2 short..

Overall good drop is good seeing RV females steppin up

SpecialMayonaise 12-01-04 03:02 AM

i agree with DeadlyVision this was a good piece.. but it was way too low ... you had a good beat and the flow was good... is this your first audio i dont think ive heard anything from you before... btw this is an alias... and you imed me for feedback but shhhh about who i am... but yea this was good... 7.5/10

Willa 12-01-04 09:15 AM

yea enygma already made the vocals louder lol

Kawn Flixx 12-01-04 09:46 AM

flow was actually good..
but on my cpu the beat played for 5
minutes strait after you spit..
is that suppose to happen :huh:
but still good drop

l lizzle yizzle :)

Willa 12-01-04 10:14 AM

yes because 2 more ppl are going to drop on it lol

La Cosa Nostra 12-01-04 10:39 AM

Nice nice, flow was all on point, at times I think you would have benefitted from being more articulate in your pronunciation of words. But other than that, it was a pretty good track. Still looking to hear the second verse!

:)

fluidmoon 12-01-04 02:52 PM

this is good so far, when i record my verse today,i'll fix up the quality a bit willa,then add some kind of hook or something,and send it to you!!!!!..woooottt....but you sound so much better then the last time i heard you,keep at it girl,we can only get better sweetie...1

DQ 12-01-04 02:52 PM

I liked this drop a lot! Nice going girl, the flow and everything was straight. Keep on dropping things like this, i know i'd certainly be listening to that...can't keep the ladies down no more, hehe

DQ

EastCoast 12-01-04 04:29 PM

good shit home gurl.............i liked it!

*nice drop

~1~

Soljah 12-02-04 06:36 PM

tight... flow was good. tight beat andeverything.. nice jobs :thumbup:

I. Mind 12-03-04 10:06 PM

wow, ur pretty good, hey will, can i use dat beat also?lol

[.:D:.] 12-03-04 10:29 PM

hmmm...this one seems like it will be nice...vocals are to low tho..really low...i cant really hear the lyrics...

well u gettin betta tho...maybe some more emotion...

but definately turn up ya vocals...stay up shorty...


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