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road trip
im on a road trip-speeding down the road.......... im on a road trip-unable to stop.......... im on a road trip-cops anit stopin me.......... im on a road trip-having fun in da ganster car.......... im on a road trip-signing hip-hop-dont-stop.......... im on a road trip going 150mph no problems.......... i was on a road trip and i crashed.......... i was on a road trip im in hospital now.......... im not longer smiling im giveing the frown.......... even since that day i learnt me leson.......... ever drive 150mph down a bust street.......... ull end up brush like a moldy sweet.......... all i can think of now is that road trip i cud of died.......... ive still got the broken leg form that day.......... i got fined by the cop speeding that day.......... the road trip was fun until we crashed.......... the baded bit the my face got mashed.......... |
i liked your approach.vocab was simple but that goes back to the approach you took.
i liked how it went from fun to tragic so quickly.twists are great.keep em comin'7/10 |
that was my 1st 1 ever.........................
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coem on uppin 4 feed............................................
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not to bad, not to bad, 7/10....keep elevatin you will be aight
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thanx 4 da feed uppin............................
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