Wreckage vs Loveliss Grandz
 

Battle Rules:

UNLIMITED Line
No Recycling
No Biting


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-04-04 at 03:16 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Loveliss Grandz has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-01-04 03:16 PM.

Wreckage has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-01-04 04:03 PM.

By the way, No crew votes son, U seemed to have deleted it It figures....

Check it'
I took this mic and blew up,Detonated On this shamed'Lame'
My game,I do the damn thing, Leavin you wide like a gangbang'
Trying to "diss" Me, ur funny with ya bitch slang, With an accent from texas
Look at the name, I'll leave you in a mere wreckage

(Turning it up)

Stick you in a coffin, Leavin you Clostraphobic'
Your' bum likE A nobody, And don't know where your home is'
Rapverse is for skilled, Not 12 year old Poser's
Get the fuck out, and when that door hit's,I'll be the one closing'

(Now I'm pissed)

Your mom can give you 1 g, and it still wouldnt be a Lustfull'Brag'
I never ever seen a guy dickride his crew so bad, Until I seen a "Loveliss Grand"
Only pussy this lame get's Is a cat in his hand'
Learn this shit, I'll leave your hoe so wrinkly' It looks like the palm of my hand'

(Now on a more deeper note)

I don't know you, But I hate your Violent Head's
I wish your crew dead, Biting bitches Tryna Scavage for bread'
Crumb's hit the floor, But mutt's like you are damn stupid
U could finger fucka bitch, And leave her pussy sorer Than your duce did'

Check this cat, Ima fucking hunt and murder'ya
Trying 2 "keep strapped" Down, Wit a strapon-N-a-bra
You tampon'd Clown, Shootin for the star's But still gettin sonned'
Tell me one last time, How bad wreckage just murder'd Ya dunnie'

I don't know exactly what rules u play by
But ur soft son,stylez more jelly than K.Y.

Spittin' dat bird shit don't make nothin' u say fly
Stop boastin' bout urself,we had enough witcha gay pride

A cat like u can only be a mothers regret
Mad she ain't swallow,rather than spreadin' her legs

Only way u'd have a consistant flow,u know! drop on the reg.(regular)
Is if ya' moms had her period witchuaz a sperm dead in her egg

You can come witcha guns out,Im restrictin' ya' arms like hand cuffs
It reminds me of crushin' herbs,for rollin' up blunt,the way i'm light'n ya' ass up

Ur style scientificly analyzed,is catagorized as cryogenics
That's why every time u say ur hot in ur rhymez,i don't get it

I'm the wrecker here to wreak this wretched wrath on u Wreckage
U couldn't spit toxic flow's if asbestos had ya' tongue swelled n infected

Ur the type of emcee thats easily fatigued,u run V.T.-huh,ur stylez exhausted
Like fat bitches on treadmills,lowerin' speeds to try and walk it

Ur a flamin' faggot,that's as close as u'll ever get to bein' a hot artist
Ur more like the contents bumbs burn to keep warm,ur hott garbage

I'm on some violent spazzin' shit,ill spits at this violent advocate
U throw punches wild,none landed or damagin'

Peeps sit n watch at the screen,seems like nobody can stand you
But you can't get to me,its like i was born wit' advanced ankles

Throwin' death blows wit' my eyes closed and still connectin' precisely
Direction perfected,punchin' wit' words as my weapon,don't try me

Ur R.V.'s whore of the month,and ima try my best to get u elected
Probly couldn't come out ontop for that either,so i'll be expectin' u second

fUCKIN weak Uppin this shyt Im tired of lil girls tryna rap.

This was feedback posted for Wreckage
 

Blah@this battle.
Not really good.

Wreckage: Work on your structure...concepts for punches and shit. For a battle this long, you should drop something decent. All that talking between the verse in unecessary. Just write your verse. Your punches were type simple. Work on some new ideas, just look around that room or something, you can find some lines.

Loveliss: Dropped garb too. Italics@the end of each lines? Looks gay, punches were weak, simple, played. Didn't like it. Work on that too. Your structure is geey. You don't have to do all that, just write ya verse, don't spilt no lines.

both need work

Holla !

Voted For: Wreckage

I hate you wreckage. but that don't mean I can hate vote on you. u killed this guy.

wreck
Your mom can give you 1 g, and it still wouldnt be a Lustfull'Brag'
I never ever seen a guy dickride his crew so bad, Until I seen a "Loveliss Grand"
this was a smoothe punch

I took this mic and blew up,Detonated On this shamed'Lame'
My game,I do the damn thing, Leavin you wide like a gangbang'
forced, but nice

Loveliss
Only way u'd have a consistant flow,u know! drop on the reg.(regular)
Is if ya' moms had her period witchuaz a sperm dead in her egg
Nice wordage, but what does it mean?

I'm on some violent spazzin' shit,ill spits at this violent advocate
U throw punches wild,none landed or damagin'
weird...,but nice

Gosh i hate doing this....v/ wreckage

p.s i still hate you.
Loveliss, nice things but wreckage had it...gross,,,i know

Fuck you, Even tho u voted for me, Ur still a fuckin herb. UPPPPPIN

Voted For: Wreckage

I don't know exactly what rules u play by
But ur soft son,stylez more jelly than K.Y.

Spittin' dat bird shit don't make nothin' u say fly
Stop boastin' bout urself,we had enough witcha gay pride

A cat like u can only be a mothers regret
Mad she ain't swallow,rather than spreadin' her legs

Only way u'd have a consistant flow,u know! drop on the reg.(regular)
Is if ya' moms had her period witchuaz a sperm dead in her egg

You can come witcha guns out,Im restrictin' ya' arms like hand cuffs
It reminds me of crushin' herbs,for rollin' up blunt,the way i'm light'n ya' ass up

Ur style scientificly analyzed,is catagorized as cryogenics
That's why every time u say ur hot in ur rhymez,i don't get it

I'm the wrecker here to wreak this wretched wrath on u Wreckage
U couldn't spit toxic flow's if asbestos had ya' tongue swelled n infected

Ur the type of emcee thats easily fatigued,u run V.T.-huh,ur stylez exhausted
Like fat bitches on treadmills,lowerin' speeds to try and walk it

Ur a flamin' faggot,that's as close as u'll ever get to bein' a hot artist
Ur more like the contents bumbs burn to keep warm,ur hott garbage

I'm on some violent spazzin' shit,ill spits at this violent advocate
U throw punches wild,none landed or damagin'

Peeps sit n watch at the screen,seems like nobody can stand you
But you can't get to me,its like i was born wit' advanced ankles

Throwin' death blows wit' my eyes closed and still connectin' precisely
Direction perfected,punchin' wit' words as my weapon,don't try me

Ur R.V.'s whore of the month,and ima try my best to get u elected
Probly couldn't come out ontop for that either,so i'll be expectin' u second

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ U HAD WORDPLAYS THEY WERE GOOD........BUT ON DA REAL YA PUNCHES WAS KINDA PLAYED OUT......DIDNT SENSE ANY HARD HITTING NOR DECENT ONES.......GOOD FLOW, GOOD VOCAB,STRUTURE, BUT DA ONLY THING U LACKED WAS HARD PUNCHES ELEVATE ON THAT USE PERSONALS FAM




I took this mic and blew up,Detonated On this shamed'Lame'
My game,I do the damn thing, Leavin you wide like a gangbang'
Trying to "diss" Me, ur funny with ya bitch slang, With an accent from texas
Look at the name, I'll leave you in a mere wreckage

(Turning it up)

Stick you in a coffin, Leavin you Clostraphobic'
Your' bum likE A nobody, And don't know where your home is'
Rapverse is for skilled, Not 12 year old Poser's
Get the fuck out, and when that door hit's,I'll be the one closing'

(Now I'm pissed)

Your mom can give you 1 g, and it still wouldnt be a Lustfull'Brag'
I never ever seen a guy dickride his crew so bad, Until I seen a "Loveliss Grand"
Only pussy this lame get's Is a cat in his hand'
Learn this shit, I'll leave your hoe so wrinkly' It looks like the palm of my hand'

(Now on a more deeper note)

I don't know you, But I hate your Violent Head's
I wish your crew dead, Biting bitches Tryna Scavage for bread'
Crumb's hit the floor, But mutt's like you are damn stupid
U could finger fucka bitch, And leave her pussy sorer Than your duce did'

Check this cat, Ima fucking hunt and murder'ya
Trying 2 "keep strapped" Down, Wit a strapon-N-a-bra
You tampon'd Clown, Shootin for the star's But still gettin sonned'
Tell me one last time, How bad wreckage just murder'd Ya dunnie'
^^^^^^^^^^^ SOME OF DA SHIT DIDNT RHYMED, PLUS YA PUNCHES WERE KINDA PLAYED TOO, I SENSE PUNCHES BUT IT WASNT HARD NOR DECENT. U NEED TO ELEVATE HOW TO RHYME AND STRUTURE WAS KINDA FUCKED UP, BUT U CAME GOOD.

OVERALL= DIS IS ONE WEAK BATTLE, BOTH OF U NEED TO ELEVATE ON PUNCHES AND USING PERSONALS

WRECK

P-PUNCHES (SOME PLAYED SOME GOOD)
FLOW- (CHOPPED UP BUT STILL IT WAS GOOD)
PERSONALS (NICE USING THEM)


LOVELESS GRANDS

FLOW (MASTERED PERFECTLY)
PUNCHES (WAY PLAYED OUT)
PERSONALS (U WAS DISSING HIS NAME)



aiiiiight I HAVE TO GO WITH WRECKAGE HE PULLED OUT PUNCHES SOME HARD SOME PLAYED DA FUCK OUT (WHOA~!) LOVELESSGRAND ELEVATE ON USING PUNCHES CAUSE I DIDNT SENSE ANY BEEN THROWN IAM TALKING ABOUT DECENT PUNCHES


V-WRECKAGE

Voted For: Wreckage

This was easy. Grand's rhyme scheme was so abc I wanted to cry. It was like reading some gay-ass Dr. Suess. so much gay this, homo that, I'm wondering why the guy thinks about it so much.

this line didn't even make sense:
Only way u'd have a consistant flow,u know! drop on the reg.(regular)
Is if ya' moms had her period witchuaz a sperm dead in her egg

terrible:
Ur a flamin' faggot,that's as close as u'll ever get to bein' a hot artist
Ur more like the contents bumbs burn to keep warm,ur hott garbage

Grands hottest line:
Ur the type of emcee thats easily fatigued,u run V.T.-huh,ur stylez exhausted
Like fat bitches on treadmills,lowerin' speeds to try and walk it

Why Wreckage won this:
He switched his style up and hit from different angles. He didn't do the same old "You gay blah blah rhyme"

hot ass openin:
Stick you in a coffin, Leavin you Clostraphobic'
Your' bum likE A nobody, And don't know where your home is'
Rapverse is for skilled, Not 12 year old Poser's
Get the fuck out, and when that door hit's,I'll be the one closing'

and kept it tight to the end.

Nuff said. KO

win: Wreckage.

Uppin............................................. .....

This was feedback posted for Loveliss Grandz
 

nice.... checking polls

Voted For: Wreckage

Pretty Ezy Loveliss Grandz Was Pretty Wack ............

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Voted For: Loveliss Grandz

I vote loveliss grandz. The punchlines hit hard and the shit was kinda funny. Anyways I cant give ya much advice except try not to use U n Ur alot.

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