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Intensify Effect vs Class.Sic
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 300 Check in by: 12-01-04 at 07:38 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
Class.Sic has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-01-04 06:52 PM.
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Drive a suburban up your ass………….literally driving 4x4 through intense shit--/
kid's got dickriders of the mass....couldnt fix ya structure w/ a craftsman tool kit--/ ill show you love while bringing death.…displayed ya mommas hearse--/ thought you were on the road to victory...…except your stuck in reverse--/ kids got problems with violence...rhymes played-out like ushers confessions--/ Give you double what you deserve...knock outs causing Siamese concussions--/ Violent type is wack...walk through as if there were a sign “come through herr”--/ Bring V.T a new meaning .….pussys wouldn’t fuck with me if I was a vibra-terr--/ Didn’t know what you were getting in-two……left ya in half..like it was habi-tual--/ You try to elevate but you stay stunted..click here...it’s a link to O.M.B’s tuto-rial--/ Closer… Try pulling outta this shit cept something seems to be stuck ……….* …………………………………Ya know Life can be a bitch....and ya just got fucked… *Remember the first bar… |
intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-01-04 07:09 PM.
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aight winner will get 2 W's in hes record.... good luck....
yo lets begin... it aint sold records but.... class.sick smash-hit like "DALE EARNHARDT CAR"... off "THE WALL".... * HA* this Rap-GAME is mine, cuz u dont think about the HOOP but still "PLEASE w/ da BALLS"... *get it* 1 Stop Da Talk, As I "Shock-This-Cock" while He Sellin "His-Crack" Like His-Ass-Descending... No One Likes Tha Shit You Right(Write), Like Niggaz "Left-A-Story" wit A Bad-Ending.... 2 im Lyrically burnin' up your inside-intestines, SO HOLD IT IN cuz da flow'll teach ya a "pride-lesson"..... Listen my lyrical score is "high testin", while yours is basic and "hype-missin"... 3 u need a writting lesson, cuz ya punches been used like Rentals.... u spit like ya tooth-ach, cuz ya skills a FRONT all i had to do was ASK-YA-DENTAL(accidental)... 4 SICK Keep throwin' them bows hopin' one of ya "punches" will collide.... cuz u'r too weak, its like ya "drench" ya flow wit "alkaline"...5 shit, i wish i could go back when u was born, wait till u pop out N stab u on the head with a horn from a unicorn... i could of sworn u was WARN, fucking with I.E is like throuing ya-self NAKED INTO A BUSH OF TOURN...*ouch* 6 ^^that enuff danmage lets just end this quickly... Ur rhymes are clutterd wit disgrace, they're less admirable than a cactus.... i got verbal Suicidal tactic.... while u'r trying to elevate u'rs off of hang-man 4 pracitce.... 7 *suicidal=game=HANg-man* |
good battle....
even thou u had u'r verse PRE-WRITTEN...... N mines was a free... but its all love good battle.... |
Voted For: Class.Sic
IE class.sick smash-hit like "DALE EARNHARDT CAR"... off "THE WALL".... * HA* this Rap-GAME is mine, cuz u dont think about the HOOP but still "PLEASE w/ da BALLS"... *get it* 1 2/10....do not get it Stop Da Talk, As I "Shock-This-Cock" while He Sellin "His-Crack" Like His-Ass-Descending... No One Likes Tha Shit You Right(Write), Like Niggaz "Left-A-Story" wit A Bad-Ending.... 2 4/10...good vocab but weak punch im Lyrically burnin' up your inside-intestines, SO HOLD IT IN cuz da flow'll teach ya a "pride-lesson"..... Listen my lyrical score is "high testin", while yours is basic and "hype-missin"... 3 3/10 dosent rhyme... u need a writting lesson, cuz ya punches been used like Rentals.... u spit like ya tooth-ach, cuz ya skills a FRONT all i had to do was ASK-YA-DENTAL(accidental)... 4 6/10..not bad SICK Keep throwin' them bows hopin' one of ya "punches" will collide.... cuz u'r too weak, its like ya "drench" ya flow wit "alkaline"...5 shit, 1/10 huh? i wish i could go back when u was born, wait till u pop out N stab u on the head with a horn from a unicorn... i could of sworn u was WARN, fucking with I.E is like throuing ya-self NAKED INTO A BUSH OF TOURN...*ouch* 6 4/10...wtf ^^that enuff danmage lets just end this quickly... Ur rhymes are clutterd wit disgrace, they're less admirable than a cactus.... i got verbal Suicidal tactic.... while u'r trying to elevate u'rs off of hang-man 4 pracitce.... 7 7/10...not bad Class.sic Drive a suburban up your ass………….literally driving 4x4 through intense shit--/ kid's got dickriders of the mass....couldnt fix ya structure w/ a craftsman tool kit--/ 5/10....basic rhyme good punch ill show you love while bringing death.…displayed ya mommas hearse--/ thought you were on the road to victory...…except your stuck in reverse--/ 7/10...good kids got problems with violence...rhymes played-out like ushers confessions--/ Give you double what you deserve...knock outs causing Siamese concussions--/ 8/10...good punch good period Violent type is wack...walk through as if there were a sign “come through herr”--/ Bring V.T a new meaning .….pussys wouldn’t fuck with me if I was a vibra-terr--/ 7/10 Didn’t know what you were getting in-two……left ya in half..like it was habi-tual--/ You try to elevate but you stay stunted..click here...it’s a link to O.M.B’s tuto-rial--/ 7/10 all tho IE had mroe lines and a weaker rating i give Class sic this |
This was feedback posted for Class.Sic
good verse both of u, juss checkin polls
50 char... |
This was feedback posted for intensify effect
Since It might be called as "BEEF" Or a hate vote. V.T idiots would think I'm voting against them.... If I had 2 vote It'd be for "IE", Because it was alittle more Personnel....And had a HORRID structure compared 2 Class.SIC.
class.sic Nice drop, I ahve seen better...But ur lines was pretty funny tho ^----^ UPPIN |
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it was unlimited N i aint know how much he was going.... thats why i had more lines N IF U DONT GET MY LINES PLEZ DONT VOTE.... |
Voted For: intensify effect
hmm good battle...... Punches-Over intensify got these.....i liked the Alkaline line....its nice....it caught my attention....Class.sic you had nice ones too....but not enuff to get the nail in the coffin... Personals-Ovearll i'd have to say it was a tie here....i mean bout the same on both sides...nuttin too special no...but enuff to get the nail in the coffin.....so tie here Vocab-Overall it was a tie here...lol nice from both..i liked this bout ya'll you back up ya drops wit nice vocab errytime...nice nice nice....so its a tie here..... Enjoyment-LOL its a tie here too..i liked ya drops the same.....it was nice nice nice.....i liked reading both of um...the punches and personals had me coming back for more....so keep this shit up....right here..... Overall-Overalll i'd have to say Intensify effect got this one...not by much but enuff to get the nail in the coffin.....i liked htis battle.... Notes-This is one of the most enjoyable battles ive ever read before...nothing too boring...like what most do.....these weren't the same punches...and they werent the same ol' same ol' so keep that up... |
well then vote for it to be the best text battle of december.....uppin...
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Voted For: Class.Sic
IE.-had too many strectched lines in your verse. some of ur punches didnt make sense(and im not simple-minded). but on tha brighter note, u came hard with multies and mettaphores i think. u had some nice fillers in there, and some creative rhyming wordplay, but i think ur verse wasnt as hard as it should be Class.Sic-u had a hard verse. yo punches killed him to me, but u also had some stretched lines at tha beginning, only because it sounded like u switched up ur style near tha end, which fucked up ur structure, but it was coo. u had some nice rhyming words in there for tha most part. but i think u should work on staying on point when battling. overall- i gave this up to class.sic simply because he had harder punches, and some nice mettaphores in his verse. his shit made more sense also...I.E. had a coo verse,but i seriously/HONESTLY dont think u came as hard as class.sic did...and i seen better shit from u, real talk... but good battle yalll...return tha vote...HONEST plz...link in sig... |
uppin 4 votes.....................................
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thanks for ya honest vote everyone................
upp'in for more votes............... best battle of december??? |
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