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the verbal gerbil prolific writer // all day sripture spitter and night rider// keep ya kids inside or move to anotha location prolong the iminent doom // await the invasion // cannibal rhymes eat up ya shit cajun// that means charred remains black white asian// i aint prejudice// am just meant to spit and born to split // domes wit sonic booms from my megaphone // all hail da guard too stylish to miss// too big to cross// dont disrespect me cause am de only boss// cant pay da cost or stand the loss// i read ur rights then write u off // too hot fuh moths// flame of all flames// the sun is my son// name of all names// jimmy-k is number one// gotta be cause my time is come //i cool off in da fire // then u find out my name translates messiah // not phonetically but by my actions //i kill u sporadically //but faction by faction// kickin back in a manger like a stranger//The promised one arrives in a shroud a danger // i dissolve identities then help rename ya// when am thru wit who FUCK GONNA RECLAIM YA?!?!

Don't like all the contradictions...how are you gonna mix religious metaphors with so much profanity....You tried too hard and it came across like you were struggling...it didn't flow at all.

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YO! i'm feelin you dawg! Holla at me yo if you wanna battle i like ya flow!