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Insight. 12-01-04 08:31 PM

Pissed? HELL YES.
 
............Aight Just A Bitch* you need to shut it and listen............
............If you were hopin Id cry youd better keep wishin............
............U say I'm Like your brother yet u treat me like shit..........
*Your a phsycotic whore whod throw a fit if someone showed u a 'Hunters Kit'
............U tell me bout your life and how bad u think u have it......
............I swear whining for you is sometin that is automatik........
............Your friends told me to dump ya cuz they knew who u are.....
............I hope your mom and sister both break your lumbar.........
............U say u love me but u say u dont want to hurt me?........
............Tell someone who gives a fuck, here talk 2 this pennie....
............Everyone sees it but u actually ask "Are U Pissed?"........
............Well bitch i have 2 words for u "HELL YES!"...................

^^i really dont give a fuck if u like it or not. it has helped me let off some steam.
*here intials r JB
*shes an animal lover

pz

EastCoast 12-01-04 08:37 PM

it was OKAY!not tha best though
it wuz ez to read cuz of da structure..flow was a little off though
didnt really have multi's(but o well cuz at least tha shit got shit off ya chest)
one thing i didnt like though was that u said "im like your brother".......
.........................but then u talking bout how ya'll go together.........
.........................thats not right..........sum jeery springer shit.......LMFAo

*no hate homeboy

DrasticMeasureZ 12-01-04 08:41 PM

Chea Da Flow Was Aiiiiiight Chopped Up In Some Places...but Atleast U Had To Get Off Somthing From Ya Chest Yo...u Had Some Weak Lines But Learn Fromt That.......and Elevate From That.......


Leave An Feedback In My Om


"freestyle # 2"


Chea

Insight. 12-01-04 08:47 PM

no when she said that she sees me as a brother rather than anythin else.

EastCoast 12-01-04 08:57 PM

aw werd?...thanx for cleerin dat up....................

ne way.......keep dropping and just elevate sum.

~1~


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