Pissed? HELL YES.
............Aight Just A Bitch* you need to shut it and listen............
............If you were hopin Id cry youd better keep wishin............ ............U say I'm Like your brother yet u treat me like shit.......... *Your a phsycotic whore whod throw a fit if someone showed u a 'Hunters Kit' ............U tell me bout your life and how bad u think u have it...... ............I swear whining for you is sometin that is automatik........ ............Your friends told me to dump ya cuz they knew who u are..... ............I hope your mom and sister both break your lumbar......... ............U say u love me but u say u dont want to hurt me?........ ............Tell someone who gives a fuck, here talk 2 this pennie.... ............Everyone sees it but u actually ask "Are U Pissed?"........ ............Well bitch i have 2 words for u "HELL YES!"................... ^^i really dont give a fuck if u like it or not. it has helped me let off some steam. *here intials r JB *shes an animal lover pz |
it was OKAY!not tha best though
it wuz ez to read cuz of da structure..flow was a little off though didnt really have multi's(but o well cuz at least tha shit got shit off ya chest) one thing i didnt like though was that u said "im like your brother"....... .........................but then u talking bout how ya'll go together......... .........................thats not right..........sum jeery springer shit.......LMFAo *no hate homeboy |
Chea Da Flow Was Aiiiiiight Chopped Up In Some Places...but Atleast U Had To Get Off Somthing From Ya Chest Yo...u Had Some Weak Lines But Learn Fromt That.......and Elevate From That.......
Leave An Feedback In My Om "freestyle # 2" Chea |
no when she said that she sees me as a brother rather than anythin else.
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aw werd?...thanx for cleerin dat up....................
ne way.......keep dropping and just elevate sum. ~1~ |
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