freestyle # 2
 

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Who called u dope………. I’ll put this nigga in an choke hold
Your Lungs gets tightened like adjustable folden car seats hoe
I don’t see why u think battling me will make u elevated use ya brain
The outcome I see in this is. Ya skillz gets lower, an ya jaw gets sprained
Fear me boi, leave u shaking, sweating while ya fears attatch to ur shirt
Come on down and be the next contestant to get an beat down. Get hurt
Not even the act of god can save u from this brutal beating, get ready
Cause I’m spittin some hollow points into your organs. Get liquidated
Put an darkness into your dreams fading it I’m not willing to give u light
Feel the vicious flow’z, and watch my punches will put u in an twilight
Break your leg and sprain it give u an dis-ability to walk to your future goal
Don’t come at me with that, I’ll pimp slap ya ass, like snoop “control that hoe”
I’m going to keep poppin, droppin, knockin so if u want me to stop, get da bustin
Cause now I’m done with cha, put your hand on ya chest, nope its still not pumpin


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Don’t come at me with that, I’ll pimp slap ya ass, like snoop “control that hoe- SNOOP DOGG MADE AN SONG CALLED CONTROL THAT HOE

it was cool........7.5/10
good for just a srtraight freestyle
but sum of it didnt make sense
keep droppin shit though
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chea.....................................uppin fam.............................uppin

word...it was good if it was a freestyle, keep doin ya thing

peace

hey boi.. nice freestyle.. really, u did a nice job..

Put an darkness into your dreams fading it I’m not willing to give u light
Feel the vicious flow’z, and watch my punches will put u in an twilight
^^ha ha nice very nice.. fading-darkness/light, dreams-darkness.. nice metaphoric language.. big ups for a freestyle.. keep doing your thing,
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that was a dope drop fam....nice free had good vocab an nice flow keep droppin that hot shit...1