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Crazy Collab! (rate this fuckers)
K.I.N.G.
my words speak alone like Calderon, with spanish heat// im not known to speak, im a new clone trapped within a vanished beat// my lyrics are bred upon the ones who feel them in the chest// my words are said by the ones that are feelin left possessed// obsessed fans digest the truth, i sugest you protest to protect the youth// cuz im lyrically insane, i twist your brain up, till you fell more pain then a wisdom tooth// My lyrics flow thru .Switch.'s head, and infect him worse then poisonous lead// id kill him but instead i'd recruit him to the Dark Side he madea choice and said// .SwitCh. Shits absurd...come to surprise of a collaboration uprise... Wit the unknown at the top...the heat stops from gatherin inside... ill keys..mixtures of the alphabet..prove the sickest...from a-z... Concoctions invented...n stunned viewers lay dead by these... Leave Students suprised..of a text education pop quiz... KING is sick...wait...i ont even no who the fuck that dude is... Lyrics to hurt minds...leave 6 brain tumors... Split wits..cuz shits sick..n i dont spread rumors... |
iight uppin for votes people, this kind of talent shouldnt get slept on...
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whoa...nothing positive to say for me...lol
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lol, iight well anyone else...? say positive
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well fam...fix the struc iight //'s aint good
but i guess it was iight...about a 7/10...change it up with the topic...I aint bout to scar you cuz you aight for a regular rapper..but your flow was streched and fucked remember to flow what you write back..and imagin a beat in your mind.. treat this shit serious fam...this is hiphop..and hiphop is life man.. use 100% on it..never rush a line nor word... |
yea i kno man, well if i had this as a audio it would sound fucken amazing, cuz i originally wrote it to a beat, it had amazing flow on that, and i kno...never drop a verse thats written, if it was origianlly a audio cuz its fucked up if its a writtin, but i dont kno how to make audios on my computer...
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structure change would work.
Apart from that I like it. lyric's are good,content good. keep dropping |
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