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K.I.N.G 12-01-04 10:39 PM

Crazy Collab! (rate this fuckers)
 
K.I.N.G.
my words speak alone like Calderon, with spanish heat//
im not known to speak, im a new clone trapped within a vanished beat//
my lyrics are bred upon the ones who feel them in the chest//
my words are said by the ones that are feelin left possessed//
obsessed fans digest the truth, i sugest you protest to protect the youth//
cuz im lyrically insane, i twist your brain up, till you fell more pain then a wisdom tooth//
My lyrics flow thru .Switch.'s head, and infect him worse then poisonous lead//
id kill him but instead i'd recruit him to the Dark Side he madea choice and said//

.SwitCh.
Shits absurd...come to surprise of a collaboration uprise...
Wit the unknown at the top...the heat stops from gatherin inside...
ill keys..mixtures of the alphabet..prove the sickest...from a-z...
Concoctions invented...n stunned viewers lay dead by these...
Leave Students suprised..of a text education pop quiz...
KING is sick...wait...i ont even no who the fuck that dude is...
Lyrics to hurt minds...leave 6 brain tumors...
Split wits..cuz shits sick..n i dont spread rumors...

K.I.N.G 12-01-04 11:01 PM

iight uppin for votes people, this kind of talent shouldnt get slept on...

Parallel 12-01-04 11:07 PM

whoa...nothing positive to say for me...lol

K.I.N.G 12-02-04 10:55 PM

lol, iight well anyone else...? say positive

Kawn Flixx 12-02-04 11:10 PM

well fam...fix the struc iight //'s aint good

but i guess it was iight...about a 7/10...change it up

with the topic...I aint bout to scar you cuz you aight

for a regular rapper..but your flow was streched and fucked

remember to flow what you write back..and imagin a beat in your mind..

treat this shit serious fam...this is hiphop..and hiphop is life man..

use 100% on it..never rush a line nor word...

K.I.N.G 12-02-04 11:16 PM

yea i kno man, well if i had this as a audio it would sound fucken amazing, cuz i originally wrote it to a beat, it had amazing flow on that, and i kno...never drop a verse thats written, if it was origianlly a audio cuz its fucked up if its a writtin, but i dont kno how to make audios on my computer...

Ysdat 12-03-04 06:38 AM

structure change would work.
Apart from that I like it. lyric's are good,content good.

keep dropping


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