Big-Scoot vs Nasdaq
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 5 Bars
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-05-04 at 01:01 PM

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Big-Scoot has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-02-04 03:51 PM.

Nasdaq was on his way up til he fucked wit a higher power/
Now I'mma send his stock crashin like the fuckin twin towers/
Dream Team General givin financial advice/
1 times 2 lil nigga you had betta think twice/
Cuzz I'm nice wit tha flow and you just ...aight/

Nasdaq has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-02-04 04:19 PM.

Holding knifes, That'll make you "draw blood", just to "illustrate your life"
My word play is nice, but you and your words just create more strife
I make it so complicated compared to your lines, a just a fine difference is
Fakes get so decimated and scared with my lines, I bust rhyming sentences
And the bar I just dropped has popped your pupils “Who the hell is this kid?”
And by far I just topped to the top of peoples mind as I do it again!
Ate this dude like a snack, I was disappointed but now its funny your wack
And by the way you react your surprised that I drop bombs in verbal attacks
Your chances are through, its safe to say I am the greatest and skilled too
Because when the girls say “you well hung” they talk about how I killed you

I thought it was only 5 bars lil fella, but it's cool

Voted For: Nasdaq

well my vote goes to you...... that first line was one of the most common lines of RV.....
but anyway my vote goes to you cause big scoot didnt stick to the line level so he should be disqulified... nuff said

a bar = 2 lines..... meaning 10 lines...... LOL.... dont worry everyones new at some point...

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Voted For: Nasdaq

Nasdaq - good spit man, you ripped that kat apart, better flow better everything.

Best Line - I make it so complicated compared to your lines, a just a fine difference is
Fakes get so decimated and scared with my lines, I bust rhyming sentences

Worst Line - And the bar I just dropped has popped your pupils “Who the hell is this kid?”
And by far I just topped to the top of peoples mind as I do it again!

Big-Scoot - WHACK!

Best Line - NONE

Worst Line - ALL

OVERALL - Nas you took it to em hard, harder then needed even. Big-Scoot you need to work on punches multi's personals wordplay and some vocab. you'll be dope then ;)

Vote - Nasdaq

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Voted For: Nasdaq

Emcee:Nasdaq

Verse:
Holding knifes, That'll make you "draw blood", just to "illustrate your life"
My word play is nice, but you and your words just create more strife
-------------was aiight
I make it so complicated compared to your lines, a just a fine difference is
Fakes get so decimated and scared with my lines, I bust rhyming sentences
----------------nice
And the bar I just dropped has popped your pupils “Who the hell is this kid?”
And by far I just topped to the top of peoples mind as I do it again!
----------------wtf?
Ate this dude like a snack, I was disappointed but now its funny your wack
And by the way you react your surprised that I drop bombs in verbal attacks
---------------meh
Your chances are through, its safe to say I am the greatest and skilled too
Because when the girls say “you well hung” they talk about how I killed you
---------------aiight

Comments:not bad work on vocabulary

Marks:
Wordplay - 6/10
Metas - 5/10
Vocabulary - 4/10
Structure - 7/10
Punches - 6/10
Opener - 7/10
Closer – 5/10
Personals – 5/10
Enjoyment – 6/10
Creativity - 5/10
Overall -51/100
----------51%


Emcee:Big-Scoot

Verse:
Nasdaq was on his way up til he fucked wit a higher power/
Now I'mma send his stock crashin like the fuckin twin towers/
------------aiight personal
Dream Team General givin financial advice/
1 times 2 lil nigga you had betta think twice/
------------fake, you aint no dreamteam general
Cuzz I'm nice wit tha flow and you just ...aight/
------------no..

Comments:work on everything...you suck

Marks:
Wordplay - 0/10
Metas - 0/10
Vocabulary - 0/10
Structure - 0/10
Punches - 0/10
Opener - 0/10
Closer – 0/10
Personals – 0/10
Enjoyment – 0/10
Creativity - 0/10
Overall -0/10

i post 0s because there is no point telling you..

Overall: nasdaq wins because he was the better textcee...

oh and return the favor in the sig....or leave feed back on my first open mic......pz

Voted For: Nasdaq

yeah, he took this one hands down.....his flowed better, he had better vocab....he edged out the punches a little cuz most of his lines were self-glorification, but this got it:

-yeh, that was nycest line in the whole battle....

big scoot....your lines were off and your punches were weaker than nasdaq's....you need to realli elevate and put more creativety into your lines....
sooo....v/nasdaq