R.I.S.E.(The Introduction)
 

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1778410

YO Rise new site ,how you gone destroy this one
your flowz is the best,lyricaly noone fuckin wit you/
spit that heat kid


YO YO

My minds in verbal distress crazy flow in ill depth/
no mc can match my breath,sharp bladed words rip thru flesh/
lyrcial king aim for best.my mystic crush any foes thats left/

so fuck burring the hatchet,im like bullets from a wratchet/
cranium will get cracked in,my verse bringing the facts in/
murderous mc back in action a classic flow im deep so far in the blackness/
R.I.S.E.usin biblical tatics,revalations lyrical axises/
my verse chop heads off like a sword with the axes/
niggas waba get ahead so much that i had to rise by going backwards/

i took another route,from NY ,cali,and the new south/
back to New York,back with the pitch fork real talk/
cuz im bless, like NAS carry the cross, weak mc's gone feel the force.../left dead by a hearse door,who want war? im like a mind in the ocean i flow for shore(sure)so hard watch your spinal cord get torned/

this is my freedom of speech,im like a thousand disciples roundin
your street/loaded with heat,to face off with the rest of mc's
so who the first to leak step up to fall down unfold death L-Y-R-I-C-A-L--Y/
I got the spirit in me GOD LYRCAL CREW destroy many -enemies
my rep has been enveyed niggas wana space bar me/
delete a style that far from wack im ill im nasty/


this is my introduction ,writting to put hiphop back in function/
whoever want it wit me im crushin,niggas is LL COOL J just stay hushin,fagget niggas rhymes stay blushing,/
but mc's wana die my minds unstable im in a lyrical concussion
in a deep thought where my words is gona come out bussin
bullseye BITCHES so come rushin/


Holla my Intro what up to the whole site respect.1hun
R.I.S.E.

uppin for feedback

real niggas drop real replies,


Holla
R.I.S.E.

couldnt really catch your flow, But the content is good. Rhyme's are good.

good shit on dropping a link aswell, needa see more people following your role.

good lookin son still uppin


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R.I.S.E.

uppin for feed back.


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THE R

Nice . .

Not bad . . nicely representing New york.
Even though I'm from london, yungin.

But this was only TexT . . If this was audio your flow would be terrible/off beat try doing an audio and you will see.

Decent vocab... Could have been better. Good Multi's

7/10

Keep Elevating.

same here 7/10................................................ .......

that stuff was Cool, I do of course like all kinds of rap, 8/10

yuppz
 

yeah it was hard im wit ^^^......

Good lookin,much respect,but has far for audio,
i been there and done that,i finshed my album so im good on that point
but much R

Holla
The R

This was okay.. very mediocre but you have alot of potentilal...
6.5/10.

keep elevating... dont give up.