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J.R. Freeze vs SCIP
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6-10 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 12-05-04 at 07:57 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
SCIP has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-02-04 07:58 PM.
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J.R. Freeze has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-02-04 08:00 PM.
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RETRO BUTIONNNNN.....KIDDDDDD
...{COMPLEX}......... FReeze Extortin-Rap/Got Scip Distorted Like He Snortin-Crack/Cuz Dude Couldn’t SPIT DIRTY If His TEETH Was Sportin-Plaque// S Thinks He’s Posin-Threats/But JR's The Chosen-Vet/Got U HOLDIN Ya TITS When My Hits Expose-Ya-Chest// AIGHT PUNCH TIME>>> I don't ~have tha patience~, so I spit lyrical missiles at this cat's grill and leave him equipped wit facial ~lacerations~/ He almost reaches tha surface, but I'll stop tha flow of his spits quick, like he's gettin kill'd during masturbation//(it's over) ~*~*~*~*~*OOHHHH ~*~*~*~*~* This ain't for STatus but I'll kick you off ya throne...Next time call me out using ~tha phone~/ Your losin hope, cuz tight ryhmes elude you like a championship ring does ~to Malone~//(murder) ~*~*~*~*~* FINISHER ~*~*~*~*~* ~*~*~*~*~* ~Homez your in trouble~...I spit ~flows on tha double~ so I suggest you hide and ~go for tha covers~/ I made my lines a lil longer THIS TIME but SCip text stretches more than ~yoga instructors~// .....FATALITY..... You really dont want beef wit me dog..if you do youll be fuckin dead// Cuz I spit flames but you couldnt blow smoke(y) if you gave Chris Tucker head./((ooohhhhh Daaammmnnnn)) |
aight
This cat thinks hes a Violent Type, but dont beleive the hype/ Man this cat cant rhyme his structure like the Wright Brothers 1st Flight/ Ima Freeze this Jr so he sees not to mess wit the master of Keys/ Scip will have ya J.itz R.ed as if ya was beatin down on lease/*( liek not his dick, Dick Rydin) You think this cat plays pool wit his mouth the way he Ate Balls/ People Booin at him like NBA Refs makin Late Calls, Scip hates yall/ Im freezin this cat more den his computer, here ill give ya a punch tutor/ You could say Im~Kickin~It like little kids on scooters,Your title should be a Rap~Polutor/ Finisher: This cat cant put up a fight so how he a Violent Type/ You could be the next American Flag the way my punches give ya stripes/ Keyed in 6 minutes |
oo i thoughtt his cat was in VT oops my bad mayne shit
you should still get the punches |
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Voted For: J.R. Freeze
no shit not a hard descion hear,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,hahahahah man u ate this kat up royaly,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,had the illest lines and the phattest structure.........lollol gud shit FReeze Extortin-Rap/Got Scip Distorted Like He Snortin-Crack/Cuz Dude Couldn’t SPIT DIRTY If His TEETH Was Sportin-Plaque// S Thinks He’s Posin-Threats/But JR's The Chosen-Vet/Got U HOLDIN Ya TITS When My Hits Expose-Ya-Chest// ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ best opena in a long time....aiight yo return the favour in my battles below.........plz |
yo no beef aiight jus kloze the shit below plz
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Voted For: SCIP
This was an overall good batle but im goin to have to give this one to .......... I really like the flow to both verses there was a nice touch to J.R. flow but it still could have been a little better with the wordplay, Nice sructure to both verses, SCIP had some GREAT line too i really liked his flow but ur metas werent visible but punchlines were sick nice battle -Please return the favor on my battle I know its a lil weak but its ok Please return the favor http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=163680 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: J.R. Freeze
danm J.R got this hands down......... flow: J.R punches: J.R by far he shit was hard hitting and had way more effect... creativeness: J.R cuz those punches was sick and original... vote: J.R got this for harder punches that hit harder and was more creative and had everything going for him..... vote: J.R plez returnt he favor of a honest vote fellas... |
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