King~~Dipset vs † Gødž Ångël †
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 12 Linez
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate Votes
3-0 = KO

Accept ASAP..............

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 12-02-04 at 10:14 PM

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â€- Gødž Ã…ngël â€- has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-02-04 08:15 PM.

King~~Dipset has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-02-04 08:17 PM.

"King Shit Head" Is not built, But hes prepared to get all his organs Spilt,
His one packs reduced to saddle bag, He runs around with it full of guilt,
He knows he has set up a battle to a kid who is 2 years younger than him,
He has no idea what colors are coming, But his future is getting real grim,
If he had a "Crown" it'd be on the ground, Where it was origanally found,
It tipped off of bushes head, his stuge, Was sure to snatch it accidentally
To get his spot in a place where it dont matter if you havent yet hit puberty,
Damn man, what are you now 14, Im 12 and You havent got as much as me,
Take all your clocks and set them back one hur, Dont you skip your shower,
Your date is ready, He Is waiting at your door with a handful of red flowers.
You mouth will clench at the end of this line, Cause to me your flow is sour.

Quick 20 Minute Shyt...
Good Luck King.....

Peace~

Aii here I Go

Prayin to God Aint gonna Help This Angel
Ill shove a flag Up ya Ass so you Can See The star Spangle
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I knock Yo ass wit A leftand make You fall right
I Knock you Wit da Crusha Then Youlll See all lights
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You get Votes of Sympathy Not skills Bcuz of Age
You Get hit Like a Timpiony* Wit Iron mallets N a Gage
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The way the flow Go U Know Im Illmatic
My Skills Sound Clear But Yours ........Hear the Static?
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I Bounce you Attics Of the Top of the Statistic Screen
Then Let You Hit The ground And Bust ya Oblistic Spleen
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I got Punches That hit harder than Holyfields hit To the Gut
U Hang on me Like I Got Bushwick Bill Hangin On my Nuts
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***********************************************If Yall Dont know
A Timpiony is a Drum (very Big Drum Wit very Big mallets)

Bushwick Bill- Is a Midget That Raps Wit Ghostface
if you didnt know that Then you Dont really no your rap History.

NIce verse.... It was kinda hard to follow... You had a pretty good Vocab... Ya structure wasnt real good tho.... And you didnt really have many good punches... but you had some..... Nice verse..

Peace.........

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Voted For: King~~Dipset

not too great of a battle....both need to elevate


godz.....your verse was too preschoolish to me......some of the lines made absolutely no sense at all....a couple of the bars didnt even rhyme all that well....no hate....just sayin you need to elevate

king.....in my opinion you won this...but no by a landslide......you had a couple multis in the verse which gave you a bit of an edge.....and you punches hit a lot harder.....some of your lines had some originality in them....but also some of them were a bit played.....you need to elevate too...no hate

overall i voted for king because his punches came harder...and he was more original....he didnt use a lot of multis....but certainly more than godz.......thats pretty much it.......keep gettin better both of u.....no hate at all in this vote

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Voted For: â€- Gødž Ã…ngël â€-

Gods:
Aiight Your Verse Was More Complex With Vocabulary...Structure Was Neat..Punches We're Well Though Of Creativity..It's A Good Flow Some Multis In There I Liked It...8/10


King:
Okay You Kind Of Fell Of Not To Decent But It Was Alright..Your Flow Was Simple Though Punches Was Not Really Hitting..Creativity Take It To A Next Level Your Vocabulary And Structure Was Just To Simple No Multis...5/10

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