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Uselessness
in all this empty space there is useless air
with every breath i take it seems no one is there who will pick me up now from this down the only thought in my mind now is how how you could make me feel that way but now it seems all i do is waste another day tryin 2 show you how i wish i had you i wish the times we had were never through i've stood around for way too long waitin for you to tell me we belong lost feelings form awkwardness and this is where im endin all of this take a look at what you've dont to me you gave me hope but stole it suddenly all because it was nothin but a lost cause my life is crumbling with these neverending flaws its seeming to close all way to fast should i miss what we had in the past look at what your putting me through please look what your making me do i hope your happy now with what you've done leving shells that have been spent from a gun that have seeming killed a man just like you've killed this man |
up up up up cpme on ppl i dont want this slept on please......preciate it.... :thumbup:
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up up up up i will return feed if you leave a link...... :thumbup:
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fine w/e dont feed.........ill just stop poting then i wont worry about this being slept on............
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AIGHT..............I FELT YOUR EMOTIONS.......FLOW WAS GOOD..........VOCAB NEEDS WORK THOUGH............7/10 WORK ON DEM VOCABS
lost feelings form awkwardness and this is where im endin all of this take a look at what you've dont to me you gave me hope but stole it suddenly all because it was nothin but a lost cause my life is crumbling with these neverending flaws ^^^^^^^^^ GOOD CREATIVITY AND SOME META'Z KEEP DROPPING 7/10 WORK ON DEM VOCABS ADD SOME MORE META'Z...IMAGINARY................CHEA |
bump it up up.....
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