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ache vs FlOw InTeLLiGeNt
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10-20 Lines. No swaying. Check by the 4th. Drop by the 5th. flow vs. ache . Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 12-05-04 at 12:21 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. Win by 3-0 KO |
ache has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-03-04 12:51 AM.
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FlOw InTeLLiGeNt has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-04-04 06:21 PM.
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FLow (mag):
you called out ya dick riders, now you'll never aspire. ya even battle rooks & dont demand wins aquired. biting the latest tunes, like ya spittin christmas jams. mag's prewrittens are fillers & iller than shit hittin fans. ya wont drop for rec, so dont step to earn respect. cause the only ones who hand ya that, are indeph & introspect. im gonna key to this pussy, like a cherry finger. rookie's punches still wont land, like those thrown on jerry springer. undefeated season soon completed, aches the final element. fuck that title, i'll be know as the guy who retired intelligent. thinks hes got another win at hand, but hes got me wrong. cause you couldnt punch ache into agriculture if your were donkey kong. when i flow to intelligent, hes got worse results than birth control. first of all, you have nothin on me. so dont fake ya personals. ya checked in a day past ache accepted, im thinking thats a wrap. this dope is wack, ya rhymes could make the disabled interact. mag's no comp to ache, cause everythings bigger in texas. im unfortunately out of time, but ill have the rest of Mag for breakfast. |
This battles like taking candy from a baby.. but i guess i like snack food
And ya must like getting ate... cant believe you came back dude You bring heat to flows ? well im getting geeked and boast youll get beat and choked.. left decomposed from cheek to toes You wont need to post so take a breather hey This battle's a split road so ill win either way I got the urge to stab this queer.. from ass to ear Just leave the site dont post ya wack verses here I'll put a spear in ya eyes just to get my point across Realized you couldnt 'sweep' this battle if you joined a 'mop' writers block but hey!!! lol had to write 4 verses in 1 hour |
Voted For: ache
undefeated season soon completed, aches the final element. fuck that title, i'll be know as the guy who retired intelligent vs _______ Flow lost, easy to see, less lines whack punches, i think he knows it so dont get this vote dq'ed please. :( |
Voted For: ache
I Wasnt All That Impressed With Either Verse... But You Were Both Throwin Keys So Its Whatever... But Ache Just Had Better Punches/Wordplay... Seemed Like Intell Was Just Tryna Go Strong With The Flow... But He Ended Up Coming Up Alittle Weak With The Content... It Was Actually A Pretty Close Battle... Personally I Just Think Ache Took It By Alittle Though... .One. |
yea i think she took it by alot lol... 3-0 is K.O ok ache so i can get this battle over
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Voted For: ache
This battles like taking candy from a baby.. but i guess i like snack food And ya must like getting ate... cant believe you came back dude bar flows fine, but i expected stronger in the punch department, decent opening line, weak opener. You bring heat to flows ? well im getting geeked and boast youll get beat and choked.. left decomposed from cheek to toes this would sound dope in an audio... i like the bar but not a text bar You wont need to post so take a breather hey This battle's a split road so ill win either way this had some decent wordplay, punch was the best so far in the verse I got the urge to stab this queer.. from ass to ear Just leave the site dont post ya wack verses here ass to ear, wack verses here is a weak rhyme... basic punch- u can see u weren't into this verse so far I'll put a spear in ya eyes just to get my point across Realized you couldnt 'sweep' this battle if you joined a 'mop' solid closer... i'd say you had two above average bars in this, way below what Im used to seein from you, but shit flowed like an audio verse so get ur mic workin ache you called out ya dick riders, now you'll never aspire. ya even battle rooks & dont demand wins aquired. good flow, punch was basic... biting the latest tunes, like ya spittin christmas jams. mag's prewrittens are fillers & iller than shit hittin fans. good setup bar... ur punch was way off though, I see what u tryin to say but it was pretty innefective the way its written ya wont drop for rec, so dont step to earn respect. cause the only ones who hand ya that, are indeph & introspect. solid bar, good personal- good flow, this ur best bar so far im gonna key to this pussy, like a cherry finger. rookie's punches still wont land, like those thrown on jerry springer. another solid bar... punch wasn't great but it wasn't bad either, nice setup undefeated season soon completed, aches the final element. fuck that title, i'll be know as the guy who retired intelligent. audio bar here too... not great for text but i enjoy readin it thinks hes got another win at hand, but hes got me wrong. cause you couldnt punch ache into agriculture if your were donkey kong. This could have been worded better, o.k punch- good concept just worded strangely. when i flow to intelligent, hes got worse results than birth control. first of all, you have nothin on me. so dont fake ya personals. i read the bar, didn't like it... read the second line first, and first line second and liked it.. setup was stronger than your punch... monitor this inthe future you'll be surprised how often you might do this ya checked in a day past ache accepted, im thinking thats a wrap. this dope is wack, ya rhymes could make the disabled interact. punch was off... i like the dope is wack flip, but if u worded punch differently it would have been a solid bar mag's no comp to ache, cause everythings bigger in texas. im unfortunately out of time, but ill have the rest of Mag for breakfast. decent bar... would of been better audio I didn't think either verse was that intense, but i thought ache had a little deeper verse- more punches were attempted... so more hit... I think flow kept a good flow through it but really only came with strength on a couple bars.... vote ache. please return the favor... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=163936 |
aight well thats 3, good battle Flow.
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yea had to keystyle it but i need room for anothe battle so just PM strobe to get it closed and say that its ok with me to be a K.O 3-0
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