critic vs lildallas
 

iight here da rulez

no dickrydin'
10 barz
no crew votes
i spit first

i'll post in a min.

just a lil check in

Prepare ta be ko'd
uh check it uh..

yo i'm a pure battler..
get in my face i'll snap on ya..
i'll squash you like a fat mann that sat on ya..
yo i got dis talent, i got a lyrical gift..
My shoes is dirty since i stepped on yo lyrical shit..
I'm tha angel of death, i collect tha soul of this defeated foe..
My lyrics murdered you and left you unidentified like " John Doe"..
you study this rhyme, tryin ta find my weakness..
tryin ta find a flaw in this thread, but to yo' surprise i left you seamless..

fuck it nigga

post

no duckin nigga

c'mon dawg

verse

WHO you leave seamless? you need a seamtress/
to put that whack shit togetha', I can't believe you steppin wit this/
you shoulda came betta, lookin at yo last batts you shoulda known you had to come realer, iller/
what is that? some soft punches and a few fillers? /
leave me like John Doe?! /
ain't that the name of the same fatt man you currently blow/
oh, hold on... that was a mistake, it was a black a man, and ya ho/
and that nigga was me/
don't tell me you didn't see the stains in your back seat/
I don't need to find yo weakness! CUZ YOU AIN'T GOT NO STRENGTHS!!! /

iight uppin fo votes

aight ima give my vote to lildallas
in my eyes he had better punches even though this was only a 10 bar battle.
Critic has some ok stuff, but was enough to beat lildallas.
holla
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iight 0-1

uppin fo mo votes

vote= LiL

both yall were tied, but he hit it up with more multis.. hate juddgeing a battl elike that but it was the only thing i coulda done..
BTW
Hey critic i see you online wanna keystle battl eright now? holla back

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i think dis wus a pretty mediocer battle but dallas got da best of it
vote= lil dallas

Easy battle won by LiL Dallas, overall, I think he had the better verse, I think he just came with more multie's and punches. And the first line was put together very nicely...

My vote=LiL Dallas

GOTTA GIVE IT TA LILDALLAS....HE GOT THIS BATTLE....I THINK HE CAME WITH A STRONGER VERSES THAN CRITIC...BETTER MULTIS AND PUNCHES...

VOTE=LIL DALLAS

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5-0 KO, you challenged me to a rematch, i post but you spit first