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Hate chew 12-03-04 08:03 PM

Elusiv G vs REALISTIK
 
Battle Rules:

15-unlimited line's
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No dickriding bitche's
No hater's
No empire's,caliph's.lil california's voting on this battle.

topical-death.. very broad topic.can be used in many way's so voter's keep your mind's open.

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-06-04 at 08:03 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 12-03-04 08:05 PM

Elusiv G has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-03-04 08:05 PM.

System 12-03-04 08:33 PM

REALISTIK has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-03-04 08:33 PM.

Hate chew 12-04-04 07:15 PM

check....check.....

dropping mine early, got other shit to do.

Hate chew 12-04-04 07:18 PM

...the situation...

thought's of discomfort running thru my soul..
felling outta place,only the devil knew my goal..
no looking back,I continue to strive forward never to return..
no fear of the road ahead,I relise no matter what im gonna burn..
I try to hide my current state of mind,closing my eye's..
the allmighty god's aware of my truth,exposing my lie's..
am I destined for heaven,or just be frozen in time..
is it god that i see,or satan that arose in a line...
Im feelling outta reach,As if there will never be a return...
thought I seen a bright light,but now i relise it burn's...
my mind is so empty,body gone weak and dull...
Still a sprit lost in the maze,yet it allready feel's like a week in hell...
no communication,word's are distort,im not thinking well..
I feel like i am searching for a place,but have no clue what ill find..
My vision's gone blank,All I see is blue in my mind..
this sort of situation isnt new to my kind..
im unsure what to expect,unaware of the outcome...
love isnt present,it's been year's since I felt some..
im wanting to see heaven,but im'a just let my doubt run.



...how i got in the situation...



i get teased,bully'd,kicked and beat..
i hate my life,every day I am forced to admit defeat..
coming home with black eye's,just to end up reciving more..
no one I can trust,even my mum's a deicving hore..
I start to think of death,no one will miss me,im not worth grieving for..
tear's start to run from my eye's and down on my face...
is my life so worthless,that Im'a die without even a trase..
im sure no one will even notice if i just disapear..
I smile thinking of heaven,"damn it must be bliss in there"..
the knife is now sharp and my wrist is bare..
a quick clean cut,now my mission is clear..
I dont want anyone to walk in,I listen in fear..
not one person has love for me,Im sick of wishing they care..


~~Real~~

Acuity 12-06-04 04:48 PM

Yo i decided to come at death from the angel of Euthanasia - where sum1 asks u 2 kill em 2 end ere suffering:
EUTHANASIA

Ma homie given by god, 6months left on dis plain with his squad
Diagnosed wit Terminal Cancer, deres no cure - its an evasive answer
He was the best of us, undeserving to become one wit tha dust
Lord was takin him 2 soon, 6months was only 12 cycles of the moon
Spent his life as a creater, purer heart then Mother Teresa
I was his homeboy, to help any means i eventually employed
Couldn't bare to see him whrithing in pain, his face emphasised the strain
His face becoming emaciated, he was restless even when sedated
Then 3months in b, he came to me, emplored me as his G:
"I can't take dis homie, I cant be askin ma mama 2 wipe ma shit 4 me
I'm so weak dats how its gettin and I'm loosing ma pride
I need you to help me man, so I don't go undignified
Da Kemo,its makin ma health depreciate, to graphic ends u cant relate
The pain is relentless, tha analgesics are simply powerless
All you gotta do yo,is switch dis I.V right here for simple h2o"

"I luv u 2 much 2 be tha end to yo existence
Man you gotta fight dis, wit yo every ounce of resistance"

"I dun fought, it aint worked and now im distraught
I'm askin you on the real, do it 4 me,or i'll do it maself wit tha steel
Ma death will be passive, painless and hardly even long
It'll be a mystery, ma death surrounded by thick white fog"

"Its yo the simple fact, I cant see maself even doin dat
I dnt wanna c u go, r u feelin me yo?!?"

"I'm tired of being ppls burden, dis is ma time, dats 4 certain"
"Homie I'll Think it over, cos right now all i can do is cry...."
"4sho dog rememba, I need u, just 4 dis 1 last time"
I went home and deliberated, I couldnt believe what had been stated
Sit dere and imagine dis stories composition, from ma position
Cud u take yo boy's life, to end his pain n strife
So many thoughts created, evryone was hated and coldly rated
I cud c how he wanted me 2 do it, that werent da shit
I didnt think i cud liv wit dat, so i thought i'll jus giv him a gat
Fuk dat, dats cold, I decided to help ma boy ease his soul
So I went bak 2 him, and told him id help, god 4giv ma sin
He told me what to do, i was in pieces, i didnt hav a clue
I switched them bags, Wit evry movement, ma heart felt a crash
As soon as i was dun, we embraced, the windows flooded by sun
His eyes lit up, like a youthful joyous cub
I left, I shut the door, got a phonecall bout half-past four
I knew the impending message, so I let it ring on da dressage
i layed down, closed ma eyes and visualised
Ma homie in heaven, smilin down with grateful eyes
And with a tired sigh, I heard a voice from up high
"Thanks homie, u ma man, dogs 4 life"

FDBAK YO EVEN IF NEGATIVE - AND DONT JUS SAY IT WAS SHIT 5/10 TELL ME WHAT 2 DO 2 MAKE IT BETTA...PEACE ( I ALWAYS RETURN DA FAVOUR)

Acuity 12-06-04 04:50 PM

Gluck homie, 1.....................................

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streetryda 12-07-04 04:03 PM

This was feedback posted for Elusiv G
 
damn checkin polls but i say you got this fam.........good verse thanks for reppin and dealin with it....i was out for the last two days........so thats why i was inactive.........sooy man.........come back to the crew........

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