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Oz™ 12-04-04 12:39 AM

I Love You...............
 
~Thought Ride-My-Mind As I Lay Peaceful-As-A-Dove~
~These Four Letters Got Me Trapped In An Enternal Womb I'd Like To Call Love~
~A Place Where Emotions Are Deep...And Ya Thoughts Are Free-Ta-Be~
~Only YaSelf Can See.....Let Go Your True Feelings Eternally~
~Tha Place-To-Be, When The Birds-Aint-Chirpin...And Ya Soul Just-Hurtin~
~Nothin Else Matters To You In The World.....Except For Dat One-Person~
~Someone Ta Share-Ya-Pain......When Eva Ya Feel Like Goin-Insane~
~Soul Twin...Attatched Ta-Ya-Mind...Like They Was Apart-Of-Ya-Brain~
~What More Can-I-Say?...Feelings To Me Never Been-So-True~
~When You Have Someone To Share Those Special Words..."I-Love-You"~

this is for my girl....we've been in a relationship for quite a while...and i just told her i loved her....heres something i keyd up for her(she hasnt seen it)

Oz™ 12-04-04 01:09 AM

feed.............................................. ....

B. Magik 12-04-04 01:21 AM

Nice shit man...She will love this...Would've liked to see this extended a little longer, but its all good...Real nice man...return the fav with some feed on my open mic 'Runnin shit'...thanx homie...1

Oz™ 12-04-04 03:26 AM

no prob blak....thanx for tha feed...uppin peepz.............

Oz™ 12-04-04 03:59 PM

feedback...................

Oz™ 12-04-04 06:46 PM

feedback.......................................... .

Bloomquist 12-04-04 07:23 PM

Seemed bland. Nothing out of the ordinary. A basic "i love you piece". You described love, though very cliche and nothing new. it was decent. Nothing good, but not bad. i say elevate and you could get better.

Oz™ 12-04-04 09:31 PM

thanx may'n


uppin................................


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