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I Love You...............
~Thought Ride-My-Mind As I Lay Peaceful-As-A-Dove~ ~These Four Letters Got Me Trapped In An Enternal Womb I'd Like To Call Love~ ~A Place Where Emotions Are Deep...And Ya Thoughts Are Free-Ta-Be~ ~Only YaSelf Can See.....Let Go Your True Feelings Eternally~ ~Tha Place-To-Be, When The Birds-Aint-Chirpin...And Ya Soul Just-Hurtin~ ~Nothin Else Matters To You In The World.....Except For Dat One-Person~ ~Someone Ta Share-Ya-Pain......When Eva Ya Feel Like Goin-Insane~ ~Soul Twin...Attatched Ta-Ya-Mind...Like They Was Apart-Of-Ya-Brain~ ~What More Can-I-Say?...Feelings To Me Never Been-So-True~ ~When You Have Someone To Share Those Special Words..."I-Love-You"~ this is for my girl....we've been in a relationship for quite a while...and i just told her i loved her....heres something i keyd up for her(she hasnt seen it) |
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Nice shit man...She will love this...Would've liked to see this extended a little longer, but its all good...Real nice man...return the fav with some feed on my open mic 'Runnin shit'...thanx homie...1
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no prob blak....thanx for tha feed...uppin peepz.............
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Seemed bland. Nothing out of the ordinary. A basic "i love you piece". You described love, though very cliche and nothing new. it was decent. Nothing good, but not bad. i say elevate and you could get better.
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thanx may'n
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