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Takeover pt2
done in 30 mins tops you lil faggot that diss was shit....you wanted me to respond i got you.. MAB we runnin this rap shit DV we runnin this rap shit SevenThrid we runnin this rap shit Get zipped up in plastic when it happens that's it Flow Intelligent we run this rap shit Diabolic we runnin this rap shit prem nos &spul we runnin this rap shit fluidmoon we runin this rap shit {*"Watch out!! We run New York" -> KRS-One*} the takeover the breaks over its a lock.....abstrak.. that diss?i'll send you hawks avy an you still couldnt clap back.. no punches kid i suggest that you stick to only topicals... cause i'll end your lil career an piss on the chronicles... no intellect them rhymes?was they paid in rv money to rent em?..(from hawk? i'll inject venom leave ya "RIPED".. face "black&blue" like "denim"... seen your pics "nappy" kid you need a comb sendin verbal shots at your dome hawks dick swapin licks till it spits got him cause you couldnt drop alone.. gay>abstrak uncanny its never far punches slurred i leave ya blurred like contrast my "hunch is"always near always fear cause half tha shit you spoke was non facts on cs's dick tryin to get a "ride" couldnt get anywhere if you "raped-ford".. your a joke a "punk" poser need Closure? revamp the closer with a sk8board wannabe tony hawk your personals hard saught... image?you couldnt be hard if you was between a rock topically?verses seem faught I know you missin all the - net FAAAAAAAME!... But along with abstrak comes bout seventy shots to your brain... faggot: you a - LAAAAAAAME!..... Youse the fag model for "insert in abstraks ass".... Went from, atticus to abstraks str8 trash.... Had a bark when you started but now you're just garbage.... atty the c section mistress failed with "atticus" scriptures... your net fame gone in 60 secs like your erection now lets take a look at greasy pored bitches MAB we runnin this rap shit DV we runnin this rap shit SevenThrid we runnin this rap shit Get zipped up in plastic when it happens that's it Flow Intelligent we run this rap shit Diabolic we runnin this rap shit prem nos &spul we runnin this rap shit fluidmoon we runin this rap shit {*"Watch out!! We run New York" -> KRS-One*} |
yoo this was pretty dope i was really feeling the hook :thumbup: should have collabed on it tho... good wordplay and punches were pretty good... you got on abstrakt pretty hard lol still got beef w/ him ? anyways im gonna do one too against them forgot all about indeph and distilled too :thumbup:
9/10 check out my open mic called love me or leave me its dope.... all 10/10 ratings so far |
thanks for tha feed flow uppin.......
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that was tight..chorus seems familiar...wish I woulda used it :(
Oh well..overall it seemed like a good MC track..so I support it fully.. I knew you'd go back to eminem lol good drop..and stopfree postin in my open mic.. BOOOOOOOOO |
Dope drop fam,,... Abs is kool I don't have beef with him
but the personals was hitting hard on him shit... I liked this bar,,,... the takeover the breaks over its a lock.....abstrak.. that diss?i'll send you hawks avy an you still couldnt clap back.. ^Dopeness nice wordplay heavy bar,... Stay up fam.. 1~ |
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good drop.wordplay,vocab,flow,punches all good.9.5/10
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