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Conclusion 12-04-04 07:01 AM

Re-Release, 'Demonic Lair'.
 
This Is a Short Key I Did A While Ago, Did'nt Get great Feed So I'm Bringing It Back Up, This Was Just Something I Key'd..
Trippin' On The Brink Of a Hellish Existence
The Scorching Heat Proceeded With Agonising Persistence
Scolding My train of Thought Grinding To a Halt
Trapped, I was Imprisoned Amongst Lost Soul's Like a Bank Vault
Figure's Below Me Trudging,Occasionally Glancing at Their Tormentor's
Mindless Drone's Corrupted By Fiendish-Wrong Doing Dementor's
Their Heart's Had been Torn From Their Possesion and Thrown Into a Furnace
Stony
Emotionless Feeling's Stained Their Expression's One man's face was Sterness
He was In the Prime Of his Youth-What had He done To End Up here?
Prolly a Young Thug-Jackin' Car's Thiefing Introducing Drug's and Beer
The Main Priority was How Do I Evade This Twisted Nightmare?
My Eye's Flashed it was just a Vision Of My Afterlife-But I'll Live My Life Knowing Ima End Up Eventually In the Demon's Lair.

.Aeral. 12-04-04 08:40 AM

This was a very different drop, i liked the vocab.. also think your structure coulda used some work, but thats nothin big..

hit this up: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...ewpost&t=163796


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