LIL D' Vs. CRITIC
 

10 BAR MAX,
NO D/R,
NO HATES,
NO CREW,
you challenge me, you spit first

naw you spit first nigga shit

This is the rematch

I beat you one time, wit some whack rhymes//
and you still comin back, and I'm at batt//
to batt this shit right back at ya//
you rhymes is week, critics are not nice//
smoke you once and blazin you twice//
twice I had your corpse wit ya flow, thrown in the freeza and iced//
I'm eager to see the votes on this shit//
I'm emptyin clips, into ya heart or where it should be//
but you's a whack MC and like yo verse, this place is empty//
get up do not bend ova', I'm straight so you can not tempt me//

- lil d
go ahead rip this shit, i don't even feel like spittin right now

wat was that nigga, that doesn't deserve votes, u should tried harda.... damn.. this ain't no rematch..anyways check it..nuthin personal..

ayo
first of all dawg, you spelled ~weak~ incorrect..
this punchline i'm bout ta throw will hit ya up direct..
look at me now dawg, this is my conception..
Editin' ya shit, leavin you wit my correction..
His name lildallas,Texas, tha home of angus beef..
Tha lonestar state, guess you like a lot of meat..
why am i even botherin'..
i'll leave you like boarshead, i just finished slaughterin'..
you, this ain't no match, hit you wit a one punch or two..
this ain't no beef nigga, more like lunchables..

shit.. add this to yo defeated list..

lol, this lookin like a good match now, I know I came weak but you shoulda came as hard as you can and made sure you got the KO, you might get upset now

uppin fo votes

uppin fo votes people

shit we fogot ta put 5 vote win.. well it's on now

please people vote

uppin peoplez

uppin'

up

up

you rhymes is week, critics are not nice//
smoke you once and blazin you twice//
twice I had your corpse wit ya flow, thrown in the freeza and iced//

THIS IS THE ONLY THING THAT CAUGHT MY EYE W/ LIL D'S VERSE. GOOD BUT NOT GREAT



His name lildallas,Texas, tha home of angus beef..
Tha lonestar state, guess you like a lot of meat..

CRITIC THIS IS WHAT I LIKE TO SEE PLAYIN WITH THE OTHER KATS NAME... CAUSE THAT IS ALL YOU CAN REALLY DO TO GET PERSONAL UNLESS YOU REALLY KNOW THEM...

MY VOTE GOES TO CRITIC BETTER FLOW ,BETTER PUNCHES JUST OVERALL BETTER.

1-0 uppin