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Macca 12-04-04 12:54 PM

Ill Freestyle
 
I pack a quarter crack, to sell but about twice as much as that, I'm spittin this shit off tha top tha kid's gettin bored, cat's diss on me then they straight up get floored, I'm tha one and only QB but I'm not from Queensbridge, U ain't seen shit till u seen tha young man spit, I'm reppin' scraight outta Texas, look at tha necklace, so many diamonds shinin, looks like I went diamond minin', hi ho hi ho, throw ya chick on tha flo', then I get cats to stomp her and rhomp her, this shit ain't no gangbang we jsut do tha damn thang, my clique get crunk as fuck down in tha Tex, u fools sittin thinkin about what I'm gon say next, well here's a lil sumn for you to think about, look at ur competition for u try to call me out, cause! I'll scraight up flip ya young man, got damn they say tha QB's at it again, yessirre bob im back muthafucka and this is for all you weak dicksucka's, bitch yall get straight up knocked, ya whole crew get rocked muthafucke scraight upget clocked..Whoa they say tha flow is nice, I be like thanks dogg and toss em tha mic, so who ever got next up to rip this cat make sure u expose his ass cause he's a big ass act, we could call him Denzel ,but that muthafucka can't act that well, call me a man on fire cause it's training day, I'm a hurrican fool so u betta get otta my way! so make sure u remember the titans, cause next time u bust a weak ass flow like that we gon' be fightin!

Macca 12-04-04 01:02 PM

Upping this shit.

KiTTie 12-04-04 01:04 PM

Its Ok........ Seems Kinda Pointless, No Offense...... But Its Ok 4 A Freestyle. Peep Poloroid Picture 4 Me Plz. Pz

Macca 12-04-04 01:07 PM

IIght none of my shit is pointless. But I'll check theat. upping.

Acuity 12-04-04 01:27 PM

Parts of it betta than others, probably snds a hello flo betta when u actually spit it, an ok drop man. Overall - 8/10.....Peace

Mystic City 12-04-04 01:51 PM

im wit ^^^, shyt was kew soo ima give it a 7/10......

Macca 12-04-04 01:58 PM

Thanx. and upping.

Macca 12-05-04 04:00 PM

Upping this...................

Macca 12-05-04 04:05 PM

If ya'll leave feed back I'll return da favor........

Zeke 12-05-04 05:38 PM

Nice Shit Structure Was Good...Some Parts Better Then Others But Over All It Was A Good Verse It Flowed Out Decent...9/10

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Macca 12-08-04 07:17 PM

Sure nigga and if you ever stop rollon wit 50Brigade check out the real deal. Verbal Reformatory....... But thanx and upping.

Phat Don 12-09-04 01:19 PM

just needs a better flow but rahter then that its ok


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